Re: From the despairs by Prince of Void	god'swife 4.231.162.77	7-Aug-04/10:57 PM
Hauntingly awful.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.121.194.222	6-Aug-04/8:37 PM
Interesting and unconventional.
Re: I'll Make It Through by cuddlytiger17	Miggy 207.38.251.61	7-Aug-04/6:59 PM
could be a bit better considering it's a lyric, where in ny are you from anyway? (8)
Re: Torment From The Undead by XxRuby_KillsXx	god'swife 4.231.162.77	7-Aug-04/11:01 PM
"...until I make what they say is the right choice. "I will extenuate the enemies... " Your 'level of ignorance' is olympic.
Re: Certain circles by INTRANSIT	Dovina 24.52.157.176	7-Aug-04/11:10 AM
A brief epoch and a little didactic. Good "who's" "weathered face"
Re: Sand Palace by Caducus	Dovina 24.52.157.176	7-Aug-04/1:05 PM
Why the semicolon standing guard off to the right? The second verse is very nice. It's all good.
Re: Certain circles by INTRANSIT	timtonio 172.130.221.128	7-Aug-04/1:18 PM
Wow that last stanza is really cool. I like how you approached the whole mother earth thing with lines like "A mother whose gravity keeps all children near"
Re: Los Angeles by Dovina	Prince of Void 217.218.131.139	7-Aug-04/2:48 PM
the nice poem ..i felt what u were going to say
Re: Natural Remedy by richa	Prince of Void 217.218.131.139	7-Aug-04/2:51 PM
sth made me think about this poem ..welldone
Re: Don't Look At Me! by assisenormus	candaliesa 69.108.164.169	6-Aug-04/11:33 PM
ooooookkiiie doookie
Re: To you by freelancejoker	New Life Drug 69.106.227.126	7-Aug-04/12:30 AM
until you get your heart broken and say "what was i THINKING!???!" sorry..hope it works out
regarding some deleted poem...	New Life Drug 69.106.227.126	7-Aug-04/12:33 AM
kaleidascope poon. HAHA i like "evening odds" too.. pretty clever. i am totally skunked
Re: Cast Iron Coffin by D. $ Fontera	New Life Drug 69.106.227.126	7-Aug-04/12:36 AM
i cant wait to see the finished product. its like something i'd tell my kids..if i had any..
Re: To you by freelancejoker	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	7-Aug-04/2:22 AM
Soggier than an overly turgid hump-loaf.
Re: Mike Pike!! by DR Limerick	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.70	7-Aug-04/6:35 AM
and that's when Tina screamed "IKE!"
regarding some deleted poem...	ForgottenSoul17 216.76.239.36	7-Aug-04/6:56 AM
Thanks maybe yawl are right, he has hurt me 4 times, maybe I should break up with him, but he has a tumor and I dont want to leave him in a time he needs me most....*sighs* so much drama ugh!
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.70	7-Aug-04/7:12 AM
"and god goes not at all with wine" ace.
Re: To you by freelancejoker	ForgottenSoul17 216.76.239.36	7-Aug-04/7:41 AM
Wow .. I give it a 10 ^__^
regarding some deleted poem...	ForgottenSoul17 216.76.239.36	7-Aug-04/7:44 AM
Beautiful..I give it a 9..only because the repetion confused me, but im easily confused hehe ^__^
regarding some deleted poem...	ForgottenSoul17 216.76.239.36	7-Aug-04/7:52 AM
i give ita 8 ^__^