regarding some deleted poem...	frdup717 4.29.181.60	3-Aug-04/12:00 PM
ok
regarding some deleted poem...	eyrbare 64.33.190.19	3-Aug-04/7:54 PM
k...
Re: Innocence by QuirkyWonder	frdup717 4.29.181.60	3-Aug-04/12:14 PM
lovely -9-
Re: Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw	Shardik 24.130.62.63	3-Aug-04/12:07 PM
Bombastic...11!
Re: Summer by Dovina	eyrbare 64.33.190.19	3-Aug-04/7:29 PM
Lovely poem, great image!
regarding some deleted poem...	frdup717 4.29.181.60	3-Aug-04/11:56 AM
i knew i wasnt the only one!
regarding some deleted poem...	frdup717 4.29.181.60	3-Aug-04/12:11 PM
my sentiments exactly
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:13 PM
An insult if I may... A stew of festering diarrhea and the blood of an Irish whore. *4*
Re: Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:08 PM
If this is poetry...well... then I am unbelievable in the sack...and we all know where...heh, touchè. *7*
Re: Summer crush by sk8rs_rule_all	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:21 PM
Hey guys, this poem totally L15 W4s W5. Right guys?! Right?! Haha! I mean, if it was any more L28 W2, I'd feel like a L12 W6. Ha! Haha! Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know? But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*
Re: Summer crush by sk8rs_rule_all	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:21 PM
Hey guys, this poem totally L15 W4s W5. Right guys?! Right?! Haha! I mean, if it was any more L28 W2, I'd feel like a L12 W6. Ha! Haha! Hey sk8rs! Don't worry about that, it's just a little inside joke, you know? But seriously, this would suck as a song *5*
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.130.62.63	3-Aug-04/12:08 PM
Solid, like a wiffleball at the brown eye of dependency.
regarding some deleted poem...	frdup717 4.29.181.60	3-Aug-04/11:55 AM
i love slipknot and korn i hate emo, rap, and pop (chewing on rocks) i like your poem alot! ["KORNY" aint it! lol]
regarding some deleted poem...	frdup717 4.29.181.60	3-Aug-04/12:09 PM
i like it so much although i dont know why but without scoob and shaggy i think i would die
Re: Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer	Shardik 24.130.62.63	3-Aug-04/12:09 PM
Good god, you still blowing the water pipe over there with carrie? Does not the buckets of blood slighly staunch the buzz?
Re: Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw	Dovina 24.52.157.176	3-Aug-04/12:25 PM
The votes and comments here tell us something, don't they?
regarding some deleted poem...	Shardik 24.130.62.63	3-Aug-04/12:14 PM
Furney, have you seen Some monster? good god watching metallica turn into Stryper was Fucking miserable, I've never seen such fucking pussies, good god it was mortifying, I was openly laughing in the theater. In my opinion when metallica turns into White Lion, the end is near friends, the end is near.
Re: Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw	Dan garcia-Black 68.120.42.203	3-Aug-04/7:20 PM
"Spoofing of other users is not permitted." This is not a spoof. A spoof would be written in the style of ___________(insert poet). This poem is not written in the style of Dovina. It is written in the style of >not Dovina<. Therefore it is just a freaky, jerky elementary school rhyme. It should take its place next to "fat, fat the water rat," "I see Paris. I see France. I see someone's underpants" and so many others in that genre. -5- for showing up and posting.
Re: The recovery room by katinchina	god'swife 4.232.210.56	3-Aug-04/5:11 PM
Great title, rough-sketch poetics. The 12th & 13th lines are tops without the 'Still'up front. "C.... to s...., c... for s...". Though the title csught my eye, it does not jive with the poem. Where's the recovery? Looks like death to me.
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 4.232.210.56	3-Aug-04/5:17 PM
Once again, the last stanza kills this. Forget 'mental', just 'light years' suffices. Have you tried it without all the was', perhaps it works better in just the first stanza?