Re: Sugared Giraffes by Venus	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.15	4-Aug-04/7:54 AM
Curiously evocative.
Re: Brats by D. $ Fontera	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.15	4-Aug-04/7:55 AM
Nice re-write.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 212.118.2.83	4-Aug-04/6:45 AM
A colossal disappointment, apparently.
Re: Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:30 PM
Worthy of a dice toss at least *12* wait...*2*...wait *8*
Re: May I? by cedand1	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:42 PM
Enlightening indeed, however vague. *8*
Re: Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:36 PM
Whenever I think of prose poem my train of thought just sto...
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:32 PM
Short enough and quite unlike anything I've read for the past ten minutes, so *7*
Re: Consolation by Dovina	cat 64.168.52.224	4-Aug-04/1:02 AM
John Williams has an Oscar your work reminds me of his...
Re: He Will Be Loved by eyrbare	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:47 PM
If Pinnochio had tear ducts he would weep and if I wasn't so lazy I'd rant. *5*
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:24 PM
.........................................................................OWWWWWW!..................My head! *3*
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:26 PM
My guess? An anagram of Zahagl. *No Vote*
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:27 PM
If I had a kid like you, there is no doubt in my mind that I would drown you before you learned to write. *1*
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:29 PM
An E for effort *E*
Re: Diamonds & Glass by shit	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:34 PM
Response to P.S.: I am amused but all I cared about was the "static star" and the last line. *7*
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:38 PM
I'm not slutty at all... I mean... except for that one time when... here's your goddamn vote *6*
Re: My two cents by hobojo	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:40 PM
You're down two cents for that? Oh well, I would have put at least half of it into Viacom stock. *7*
Re: nice day by New Life Drug	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:45 PM
I, in turn believe that the last line is fitting and I'd love to have you on my show. *9*
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	3-Aug-04/10:49 PM
Please please please take out "the" in the last line and it is truly a remarkable piece. *9.755*
Re: Love, Fair by MacFrantic	cat 64.168.52.224	4-Aug-04/1:50 AM
Goddamn you for not sucking, I want to mock someone this morning.
Re: May Monday Explanation by MacFrantic	cat 64.168.52.224	4-Aug-04/1:43 AM
I liked the not sorry part, I liked the whole thing, but the end changed it to being just a "my life is so horrible" poem into something else, it could be the horrible life poem with a twist if you view the person in this poem as so out of their mind that their sorry doesn't matter, because they can't apologize for something they have no control over. So it's some kind of last grasp at control, a failed one.