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frdup717 4.29.181.60 |
2-Aug-04/8:33 PM |
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| Re: Life On Earth by dougsoderstrom |
cat 64.164.169.80 |
2-Aug-04/11:33 PM |
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i thought this was cool, who gave this a one, that's total bs, yeah some people hate rhymes, but this had some substance and connection to the every day person who feels trapped...i hoped i spelled rhyme right.
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MacFrantic 198.81.26.16 |
3-Aug-04/12:38 AM |
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Absolutely oustanding for someone more partial to the absence of rhyme, as it seems. *10*
Probably the best limerick on here, save the comma on line two which is just annoying enough.
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| Re: I Love You Mildred Rogers No Matter What by cat |
Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
2-Aug-04/8:03 PM |
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Could be said more effectively in half the words.
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patty t 24.156.158.81 |
2-Aug-04/8:13 PM |
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wow. care for a cigarette?
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edpeterson 68.20.6.40 |
2-Aug-04/8:20 PM |
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i wanted to give her my colon
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| Re: A poem crafted from the depths of my heart by capachijim |
cat 64.164.169.80 |
2-Aug-04/7:02 PM |
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I was expecting some dribble here about love and falling and you know that annoying crap, but wow, not even...
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Dovina 24.52.157.176 |
2-Aug-04/8:01 PM |
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Very funny. Most of you want to give, or rather lend, other parts. How selfish we are to want it all, or just a heart.
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cat 64.164.169.80 |
2-Aug-04/10:21 PM |
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I normally hate anything that has ventricle in the title, but...
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| Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 |
patty t 24.156.158.81 |
2-Aug-04/8:16 PM |
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truly, you are the devil.
what about gluttony?
brutal and swift -- like the Horsemen. like it
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| Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 |
patty t 24.156.158.81 |
2-Aug-04/8:17 PM |
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you sir, are the devil.
what about gluttony?
swift and brutal -- like the horsemen - 8 -
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| Re: Innocence by QuirkyWonder |
eyrbare 64.33.190.48 |
2-Aug-04/8:56 PM |
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Lovely! Great visual poem! Way to paint a picture with words! =-)
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frdup717 4.29.181.60 |
2-Aug-04/8:39 PM |
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the way you write makes me feel as if
i were observing it and living it at the same time
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| Re: Harvester of Sorrow by frdup717 |
eyrbare 64.33.190.48 |
2-Aug-04/8:53 PM |
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Nice rhythm. If I may ask, is there a reason "lie" is not capitalized? Typo? Just curious.
=-)Â
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| Re: Innocence by QuirkyWonder |
electroman1979 198.81.26.16 |
2-Aug-04/9:25 PM |
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great poem, i like this more than ur others, seems to be of a better mood, -9-
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| Re: nice day by New Life Drug |
cat 64.164.169.80 |
2-Aug-04/11:07 PM |
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i know this sounds dumb, but i like how you said it, i just don't like the subject, i wish there was a subjective vote and an objective vote...
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cat 64.164.169.80 |
2-Aug-04/11:08 PM |
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cat 64.164.169.80 |
2-Aug-04/11:11 PM |
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i seem to only vote on things i like, a fear of being mean of telling someone no...well this doesn't have much to do with your poem, but i love the whole brando going to the moon type thing...
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| Re: Dan by dougsoderstrom |
cat 64.164.169.80 |
2-Aug-04/11:30 PM |
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i liked this, i love the whole dot thing, the "dan" "fan" "plan" thing, the whole trying to describe going beyond self, that's always positive.
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| Re: You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom |
cat 64.164.169.80 |
2-Aug-04/11:26 PM |
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but you can kill a dead man, as long as he's talking...yes i have an aversion to the caps button and i'm a uh three dot whore, it's got some kind of name within the whole grammar thing, but its late and stuff so...
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