Re: Saturn by Bachus	wilco 66.162.22.123	31-Jul-04/4:08 PM
holy frijoles
Re: Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	some deleted user 24.222.81.233	31-Jul-04/4:08 PM
INSIPID Is this poem or quiz?
Re: Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	wilco 66.162.22.123	31-Jul-04/4:19 PM
i.e. - "YOU CANNOT DO WITHOUT ME": You can, it just hurts a little more.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 66.162.22.123	31-Jul-04/4:20 PM
You should get a psychotic girlfriend and then every night will be an adventure.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	31-Jul-04/4:05 PM
At least you INSIPID even your own. But I don't find it lifeless or dull, though Doctor Smellygood is a bit weird.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 66.162.22.123	31-Jul-04/4:13 PM
It's sad that the Democrats aren't even going to TRY to win this election. It's even sadder that people are actually going to vote for Kerry, who (if it's possible) spouts more bullshit than Bush. As for the (poem?) I'll give you a six simply for taking the time to put all this down.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 24.222.81.233	31-Jul-04/3:57 PM
INSIPID Why must the afterfarts be afterward?
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.14.144	31-Jul-04/3:19 PM
How dare you! "I am the Sad Bastard" not you. Nice subtle rant. -10-
Re: THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62	some deleted user 24.222.81.233	31-Jul-04/4:01 PM
Your poems are copyrighted as soon as you put sticky finger to pad.
Re: The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.14.144	31-Jul-04/3:27 PM
The misspellings and lack of punctuation may be a "style" or a "voice" the writer is trying to convey. I need more input before I judge the poet's spelling and grammar level. -5-
Re: The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx	some deleted user 24.222.81.233	31-Jul-04/4:02 PM
Yes you do have mighty wispy ears sir!
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 66.162.22.123	31-Jul-04/4:02 PM
That's pretty darn sad.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.15.85	31-Jul-04/5:45 PM
Ah the delicious Surf and Turf "rump roast&fish." A meal fit for a king. Here, King. Smell the farts and eat the poet. Yummy! -9-
Re: Dead by QuirkyWonder	wilco 66.162.22.123	31-Jul-04/7:04 PM
I realize that things get bad, sometimes, but I truly cannot understand cutters. I understand the concept, but I just really don't get it. I encourage you to change your life if you're not happy with it. As far as the poem goes, it's not very good. I have read some things by you that show promise but this is not it.
Re: The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx	wilco 66.162.22.123	31-Jul-04/7:08 PM
I think if I was walking through a graveyard and the dead people started talking to me, I would get my ass out of there. I've seen way too many scary movies to know that when dead shit starts talking, it's time to go. That, or maybe you just forgot to take your Risperdal this morning...I don't know.
Re: You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.15.85	31-Jul-04/5:31 PM
Haiku- 17 syllables, three lines, 5-7-5. Even though "You can not kill a dead man and I am not a- fraid to die, Buddy" has the right syllable count, it doesn't stay true to form. I hate forms. But I like a good line to say when I'm drunk at a bar and some other poet is calling me out(to fight, not to dance). Come to think about it, it works for either happenstance.-5-
Re: Barflies and Bombshells by wilco	Dan garcia-Black 67.122.14.144	31-Jul-04/5:13 PM
A second kiss? Not one last roll in the hay? You get the -9- points because you didn't ask for a -69- before the bombshell drops her drawers.
Re: The Chaos by Prince of Void	Dovina 24.52.157.176	31-Jul-04/2:07 PM
A good idea, but not strongly presented. I'd like to see the ending be more definitive. I became a mystic They are just consumers Led me to find myself Trying to keep the decaying day away As the people become more hollow
Re: THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62	Prince of Void 80.253.129.130	31-Jul-04/2:53 PM
i understand ..so i like ur poem caus ei feel like the person who is in love ...try to keep the lover as close as possible ..that's was nice poem ..very good
Re: Saturn by Bachus	Prince of Void 80.253.129.130	31-Jul-04/3:01 PM
That was a nice poem ...i like it