regarding some deleted poem...	patty t 24.156.158.81	31-Jul-04/12:56 PM
and thank you doug!
Re: No One by sk8boardandpoems	XxRuby_KillsXx 67.180.80.13	31-Jul-04/11:53 AM
that was a good poem...
Re: You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom	dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.1	31-Jul-04/10:59 AM
Thanks, Dovina. Your Friend, Doug
Re: The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx	Dovina 24.52.157.176	31-Jul-04/12:54 PM
Please check spelling before submitting. Thank you.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	31-Jul-04/10:28 AM
Like the beat poets of the fifties with their agendas. It's hard to wade that boring political stuff.
Re: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62	patty t 24.156.158.81	31-Jul-04/1:26 PM
oh wait, it's a guy. same deal!
Re: THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL by massangel62	patty t 24.156.158.81	31-Jul-04/1:39 PM
please peter-- take her back!
Re: Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.26	31-Jul-04/9:12 AM
A Ranticle about god is angst that aggravates misunderstanding. Just remember the sentence. "What Would Jesus Do?" Keep in mind "We're all dying (some faster than others)." Ah there's the peace we seek. -9-
Re: You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom	Dovina 24.52.157.176	31-Jul-04/10:30 AM
Not a new thought, but a good one. Not really a haiku either, but a good way to live.
regarding some deleted poem...	dougsoderstrom 207.80.112.1	31-Jul-04/11:02 AM
Dear Patty: An absolutely wonderful expose of sadness! Your Friend, Doug
Re: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62	patty t 24.156.158.81	31-Jul-04/1:25 PM
quickly, get her back--before you have to write any more poems like these
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	31-Jul-04/12:16 PM
This is so so sad, it must be a satire on so so sad. Assuming that it is, I'm giving a 9, not the 0 it would be otherwise.
Re: I'M STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU by massangel62	Dovina 24.52.157.176	31-Jul-04/1:19 PM
"tears Flowed like a river bed"??? Riverbeds don't flow, and most of the other analogies don't work either. they seem only there for the rhymes.
regarding some deleted poem...	patty t 24.156.158.81	31-Jul-04/12:53 PM
correctly ascertained dovina! when you spell it out under the hot lights of stilted prose, self-indulgent sadness loses its appeal, becoming this grotesque monstrosity of a poem. much better to be happy. (though the people who sell us pop music would not have it that way...)
Re: Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina	electroman1979 198.81.26.16	30-Jul-04/8:09 PM
the great mind of God knows what time is yes, but knows no time, God always was, always is and always will be, God created time, so to say He only helps those in the present is somewhat false... Rather, he helps those who want to be helped, who ask for it, whenever in whatever time
Re: Bon Voyage by Jeremi B. Handrinos	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	31-Jul-04/8:45 AM
Obviously, your best.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	31-Jul-04/8:45 AM
Call me an oddball, I like it as-is.
Re: Saturn by Bachus	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	31-Jul-04/8:50 AM
Quarton would be proud, i guess.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	31-Jul-04/9:02 AM
My 1.287 cents? I didn't see Mr Moors' film. He's laughing all the way to the bank. did the notes get the job done?
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	30-Jul-04/7:28 PM
Silk usually comes without lace and vice versa, but okay not always. What I really can't buy is not kicking off the high heels before going to sleep. Maybe you should try wearing them awhile and then see if the last line really works. Otherwise good.