regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.49	30-Jul-04/8:19 AM
Who's TISA?
Re: Question of the day by PooP	frdup717 4.29.181.60	30-Jul-04/12:48 PM
i completely agree
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.49	30-Jul-04/8:15 AM
Choices. You want fries with chilicheese or or chilicheese with fries? Where are those choices I remember Lincoln/Bryant or JFK/Nixon or God/Apple? How did you stay awake? Well written. Well, there's always 2008- Arnold/Denzel.
Re: Mors Omnia Solvit by shit	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.49	30-Jul-04/8:29 AM
Permanent solution to temporary situation. May I have your shotgun when you're finished, Kurt?
Re: MY HEART REMEMBERS by massangel62	Bachus 24.130.62.63	30-Jul-04/1:56 PM
I came to read this because I thought your name was 'massangil' like the douche.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.49	30-Jul-04/8:00 AM
Birches? I thought it was a typo- moist air stroking bitch's white lace on porcelain skin
Re: Bon Voyage by Jeremi B. Handrinos	frdup717 4.29.181.60	30-Jul-04/3:50 PM
very good i like it
Re: California triolets by zodiac	sanity 80.46.169.174	30-Jul-04/4:54 PM
very nicely done
Re: Outhouse by newagepoet2000	sanity 80.46.169.174	30-Jul-04/4:55 PM
Hmmm interesting thoughts, bet I know where you were when you thought of this one.................
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 24.52.157.176	30-Jul-04/7:17 PM
It seems a few mere strings to undo in theory and a few folds to flatten in what time and space you had available would have been no problem for one so adept in grammar. Oh well.
Re: Fragile by QuirkyWonder	Bachus 24.130.62.63	29-Jul-04/9:52 PM
oh dear that was like squashed emo droppings, totally gross, you fucking SUCK!
Re: Counting seconds for blowing this world up by Prince of Void	Bachus 24.130.62.63	29-Jul-04/9:54 PM
That was a skid mark, really, did the world lie to you son? Pull up your britches, and learn to lie better.
regarding some deleted poem...	Bachus 24.130.62.63	29-Jul-04/9:57 PM
I've seen smattered bug strewn across nine hour road tripped windows with more sole, you cad.
Re: Bowling For Turpentine by horus8	hobojo 69.140.80.80	29-Jul-04/10:01 PM
There is so much more wrong with Americans and their perceptions of what life is all about - oh do tell more.
Re: The recovery room by katinchina	Bachus 24.130.62.63	29-Jul-04/10:18 PM
The Kitchen ( A Free curse) By Capt. Napkin Fat eyes pleading Plump hands reaching out Obese gravy stuffed dumplings Lifeless Pugeot smells of life drinking spirits Plummish smells of deaf defeated pots and pans Old crapes on sheets, old flour on him Nectarine hair, bloating rumps "The illusion of health and food full bellies"? A cornucopia of...Corn... Starving for pop Still clinging to aluminum, clamoring for salt "The smell of death I met miles outside"? Inside, the Kitchen gleamed with new dishes to break my momma tongue against like a wounded seal on the dingy of infidelity, and a filthy floor.
Re: Saturn by Bachus	gregsamsa222 64.12.116.70	29-Jul-04/11:30 PM
you've done better, and without comma splices. some phrases were very good, and i liked the feel of the poem, but've seen/read a LOT of Lord of the Rings in the past few days and was reminded too much of it. And a comic book called 'sandman'. Anyway, I usually like your stuff but this didn't do it for me.
regarding some deleted poem...	gregsamsa222 64.12.116.70	29-Jul-04/11:33 PM
i wouldn't quit my day job, but that's a nice rhythm.
Re: Fragile by QuirkyWonder	gregsamsa222 64.12.116.70	29-Jul-04/11:39 PM
i wouldn't say you are emo droppings, but that does seem more posed than honest. it is poetry, not lit class.
Re: Mors Omnia Solvit by shit	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	30-Jul-04/1:59 AM
Multes pisces in meam corpum nudum diffundo
Re: MY HEART REMEMBERS by massangel62	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.86.113.159	30-Jul-04/2:02 AM
He probably looked in your "poetry diary" and realised what a horrible mistake he was about to make. Copyright ©2004 Michele J Post