regarding some deleted poem...	donmiguel1960 68.96.168.211	21-Jun-04/8:47 PM
Like the emotion,
Re: Exquisite butterflies by donmiguel1960	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:48 PM
A painful way to live. You really need to quit now, I can't add everything you write to my favorites. on second thought, keep writing. Do you mind if I print a few of yours out?
Re: I never really knew by donmiguel1960	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:54 PM
Giving is everything. Read 'I Will Stay' by NoSage. that is my opinion. And yes, it is the truest form of happiness, charity. I have never felt better than when I can be of service to someone in need, and I thank God for giving me the skills necessary to help many people.
Re: "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE	zodiac 65.161.41.48	21-Jun-04/9:03 PM
I love the way you say "As I woke on berth of linen" without an indefinite article, though that would be the obvious and correct thing to do.
Re: Exist For You by WithoutLife	zodiac 65.161.41.48	21-Jun-04/9:05 PM
Can someone tell me what is the present tense of 'wrought'?
Re: Broken Wings by donmiguel1960	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/9:05 PM
For some reason I kept picturing the Holy Spirit. You say you have never written before? what a way to start!
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 65.161.41.48	21-Jun-04/9:10 PM
In my opinion, this is the least Fiona-Apple-like of your poems. I mean that as a compliment. PS-I'll give you five dollars if you can come up with a better response than 'Thanks!'
Re: unbroken bottle by skaskowski	zodiac 65.161.41.48	21-Jun-04/9:17 PM
I don't think you've really thought out the line "There are rivers to cross between happiness and loss" very well. PS-I thought the movie 'What Dreams May Come' was totally ace!
Re: No choice in the matter by cedand1	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:00 PM
Yea, we've got a few of those poor fellows here in Colorado Springs too. Sucks to be a statue.
Re: The Thinker by cedand1	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:02 PM
Welcome to poem ranker. nice work, kinda nice to see some good poetry from a newby, I really enjoyed this one.
Re: The Thinker by cedand1	wilco 24.176.102.131	21-Jun-04/8:02 PM
Ok, I dig this one..and extra points for being from Tennessee. ;0)
Re: Absurd by cedand1	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:03 PM
DAMN, I like it I like it alot.
Re: Sonnetias by MacFrantic	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:07 PM
So true. Well done.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	21-Jun-04/8:12 PM
For this to be a lyric, I'd like to see a more well defined chorus (I know you don't have to have one, but I like choruses). Otherwise, pretty good.
Re: Goin' For Broke by MacFrantic	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:13 PM
Busted. Reminds me of a time not too many years ago. I was probably looking for something else tho'.
regarding some deleted poem...	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	21-Jun-04/8:17 PM
Not bad, but can't necessarily see it as a lyric. *8*
Re: No choice in the matter by cedand1	MacFrantic 198.81.26.16	21-Jun-04/8:24 PM
Almost had it for a street performer... Statue!? Oh! *heh* *9.166666666666666666666666666666667*
Re: Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:27 PM
It would seem that you have a solid foundation. Enjoy .
Re: unbroken bottle by skaskowski	sliver 63.190.80.214	21-Jun-04/8:30 PM
So much to imbibe, I fear I must read this one several times. great work.
Re: The Thinker by cedand1	Sasha 69.138.236.63	21-Jun-04/8:39 PM
Wonderful! Really