regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	19-Jun-04/5:03 PM
Sounds like the Jungle Book.
regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	19-Jun-04/5:07 PM
I'm going to give you a 10 now in the hopes that you will feel obligated to purch'se the soundtrack to my life, my new album, "Fingerbanged". At record stores and outlet stores and coming to a pop a tent near YOU!
Re: What's Poetry by Sasha	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	19-Jun-04/5:12 PM
Bleef Bow'luon
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.164.116	19-Jun-04/5:58 PM
It starts out well, and unfolds nicely, but the ending left me feeling limp. Blessed with eight.
Re: Army Dock (Bangcock in July) (Free Curse) by Rug by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.217.18	19-Jun-04/7:51 PM
Did you mean "odd" instead of "queer"in the first line? Are the piss and shit references about the Asian SARS epidemic? I think the Bangcock in the title is self explanitory. Am I right? "Asswagon's blender," Daiquiris? Help! I'm trying to understand the "walk on the wild side." Lot's of strong images -8-
Re: A single day by donmiguel1960	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	19-Jun-04/9:06 PM
A blazing sling of poo.
Re: blob blob by MR Blobby	DR Limerick 62.31.28.143	19-Jun-04/9:53 AM
ARE YOU THE REAL MR BLOBBY
Re: blobby blob by MR Blobby	DR Limerick 62.31.28.143	19-Jun-04/9:55 AM
IS IT YOU MR BLOBBY?
Re: Phoebus by SupremeDreamer	richa 81.178.246.218	19-Jun-04/11:57 AM
Sliver: 19jun04--9:10am 'no matter how hard we try, I'm a mutton shunter we will always reveal at least a part of who we are in whatever we write'
Re: Phoebus by SupremeDreamer	richa 81.178.246.218	19-Jun-04/12:04 PM
Like the first two verses in terms of their lyricism. And most of the rest of it, its just the parts of the poem 'revealing yourself' seems a bit removed. Especially verse three.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.246.218	19-Jun-04/12:12 PM
The sound is not bad, nothing too tortured in terms of bad grammar or whatever. Americas majesty and 'like shangri-la' are kind of disappointing though.
Re: blobby blob by MR Blobby	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.135	19-Jun-04/12:32 PM
I declare MR Blobby to be the most hilarious thing to hit poemeranker since horus8's disastrous epic "AIDS in a crayon".
Re: Control by MakenzieNy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.135	19-Jun-04/12:49 PM
You make some good points, but you fail to realise that society would crumble if men were denied absolute control over their wives. Women are jolly good at kittens and embroidery, and their role as mothers to offspring cannot be overlooked, but when it comes to Important Matters Of The Towne, of which all women remain dangerously ignorant, I'm afraid they're best kept under lock and key. That said, I thought this was an excellent poeme, and at the very least it has given me cause to question my beliefs concerning the weaker sex, even if it hasn't changed them completely. Thanks, -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	19-Jun-04/4:49 PM
A fist full of squelch.
Re: BLOBBY by MR Blobby	<{Baba^Yaga}> 24.130.62.63	19-Jun-04/5:02 PM
lol
Re: daughter by sarah	sliver 63.190.81.217	19-Jun-04/9:06 AM
Being a single parent is tough. My sister is the same(except she has to deal with a boy)Great poem, hang in there!
Re: Phoebus by SupremeDreamer	sliver 63.190.81.217	19-Jun-04/9:10 AM
I hope you didn't write this after reading a few of mine last night! So true, no matter how hard we try, we will always reveal at least a part of who we are in whatever we write. I think it is unavoidable, kinda like death.
Re: BLOBBY by MR Blobby	sliver 63.190.81.217	19-Jun-04/9:12 AM
A great big ZERO, you will soon be #1 on the worst poem list.
Re: A single day by donmiguel1960	sliver 63.190.81.217	19-Jun-04/9:16 AM
Death can't be thwarted? other than that, 10, definitely.
Re: On the Discovery of Simple Sam and A Russian Catastrophe by MacFrantic	DR Limerick 62.31.28.143	19-Jun-04/9:52 AM
YES GOOD LIMERICK LIKE IT!!!!