Re: Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer	sliver 63.189.16.178	7-Jun-04/9:30 PM
See Waiting for the worm, By yours truly. You might like it.
Re: Writers' Block by wilco	horus8 24.130.62.63	7-Jun-04/7:21 PM
You should put a monkey in there, and then laugh at it.
Re: A life unsure by sliver	SupremeDreamer 204.31.177.66	7-Jun-04/9:23 PM
Well, that earns a nine in my book. Nothings better than a nice good edit.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.178	7-Jun-04/9:23 PM
What are you still doing up young lady? If you never did see eye to eye what was the basis of your friendship?
Re: The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet	sliver 63.189.16.178	7-Jun-04/8:40 PM
We don't acquire our distincion of morality by descent, but rather, by rising above our nature. And you know that giving in to your basest desires and needs is not the way we aspire to perfection. I have found that striving to achieve pure charity is the most fulfilling thing I have ever done in my life. Like you, I don't claim to know it all, but the path has been laid out for me, I need only the courage to walk it.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	7-Jun-04/6:38 PM
I really like the fourth stanza. Please keep that. I'm not sure I'd continue - "I find myself wishing..." But do follow up. Meat and potatoes stuff here.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	7-Jun-04/6:48 PM
A pseudo useful anecdote: While at a restaraunt today our server suggested something she really liked and I saw that *glint* in her eyes as she spoke of this entree. It was quite a lusty glint. Suggesting this particular entree might satiate her. It was really quite unnerving. 10. I believe in education.
Re: Le Sommeil- Slumber by Sasha	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	7-Jun-04/7:09 PM
I don't know french, but I'd say that since the french version end rhymes also, this took a few cups of espresso to complete.
Re: Writers' Block by wilco	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	7-Jun-04/7:15 PM
Classic simplicity.
Re: Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	7-Jun-04/7:34 PM
If you wrote the other one about the tequila worm, then, meh, is my feeling. If not, meh anyway. Maybe try one about Goldschlager instead. Goldschlager- Noun. What Goldmember has in his pants.
Re: Carl Jung And the Flying Spiders by horus8	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	7-Jun-04/7:45 PM
Your highway was plenty wide, pinballish though. Too bad Jung was working the construction zone and you failed to slow. Poor Carl. 9. For drowning me.
Re: The curse of language and other scattered thoughts by Y2kSlamPoet	Y2kSlamPoet 204.31.181.55	7-Jun-04/7:55 PM
Behold, my new rant of extremely bloated porportions!!!
Re: Carl Jung And the Flying Spiders by horus8	Y2kSlamPoet 204.31.181.55	7-Jun-04/8:02 PM
Blarg.
Re: One Week Ago by Miggy	sliver 63.189.16.178	7-Jun-04/8:29 PM
I could see this on the radio, Not that it's all that great(No offense), but it's better than alot of stuff I hear.
Re: Writers' Block by wilco	sliver 63.189.16.178	7-Jun-04/8:31 PM
Must've been hard to think up this one.
Re: A life unsure by sliver	wilco 24.176.102.131	7-Jun-04/8:32 PM
Personally, I like this a lot better now. Sounds kind of like a Phish song.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.178	7-Jun-04/8:44 PM
all the pain I caused these salty tears make me choke ?? Whats up sexy? Loving you With All my heart?
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.178	7-Jun-04/8:46 PM
I speak your name with quivering lips.
Re: Hollywierd by INTRANSIT	Shuushin 147.154.235.52	7-Jun-04/6:11 PM
I kinda liked it until it started to sound like SupremeDreamer's odd rantings - I think you've taken it up a notch, made the style more polished. Blessed with a nine.
Re: Le Sommeil- Slumber by Sasha	horus8 24.130.62.63	7-Jun-04/5:56 PM
What would we do without you Sasha... Other than what we normally do? That being avoiding Superiffic translations of crap poetry.