Re: To Orange by Lifeboatman	zodiac 65.161.41.48	7-Jun-04/5:39 PM
"wond'rous" should be "wondrous", dimwit.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 65.161.41.48	7-Jun-04/5:37 PM
The best part is "Touch of contact." With lines like that, you must get all the fat Las Vegas hookers you can handle.
Re: Writers' Block by wilco	SupremeDreamer 204.31.169.249	7-Jun-04/5:38 PM
Heh. You should of put "ThinkDamnit" as the border.. would of been funnier to me anyway. But anyway, heres an eight sir.
Re: Hollywierd by INTRANSIT	horus8 24.130.62.63	7-Jun-04/5:40 PM
I hope when it's nuked I have my cock in Britney's ass and a bottle of Krystal, up mine.
Re: Hollywierd by INTRANSIT	zodiac 65.161.41.48	7-Jun-04/5:42 PM
This is really surprisingly good.
Re: To Orange by Lifeboatman	SupremeDreamer 204.31.169.249	7-Jun-04/5:28 PM
Blessed with an eight. Go in peace.
Re: wibble wibble honk by pain killer	Fire_is_cool 65.100.207.236	7-Jun-04/3:47 PM
What in the world is that about? That is got to be the weirdest poem I have ever read. Very interesting though.
Re: Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer	Sasha 69.138.236.63	7-Jun-04/3:17 PM
I'll give you $30 if you can find one native english speaker who actually talks like this. No one English dialect exhibits all of the features in this villanelle. So I'll have to give you a six for being inauthentic and inconsistent.
Re: Feelings by Fire_is_cool	Fire_is_cool 65.100.207.236	7-Jun-04/3:20 PM
I know it's lame but forgive me, I can't help it.
Re: Le Sommeil- Slumber by Sasha	wilco 24.176.102.131	7-Jun-04/3:24 PM
another translation?
Re: Bitter bacardi makes the black stones dance. by SupremeDreamer	Sasha 69.138.236.63	7-Jun-04/3:26 PM
Oh, and you henceforth have no right to pontificate about stuffy "classic" style when you have talked about a "hat so drear." What's worse though is that you've done it in a poem with "rollin'" and " 'cause" sprinkled through it. It's jarring to say the least.
Re: Hollywierd by INTRANSIT	wilco 24.176.102.131	7-Jun-04/2:00 PM
Started out good, but yes, not as good toward the end..
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	7-Jun-04/2:03 PM
I must say that I'm more than a little perplesed by this. I guess I'm going to have to do some googling. Anyway..7 for making me think...I may raise it if I figure this out. ;0)
Re: paperclips by son of the moon	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/2:03 PM
Heh. Nice work, sounds like something I'd do while idling at my cubicle terminal. You've been blessed with nine.
Re: Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/2:11 PM
Unfortunately, I don't like country.. but you've managed to earn my blessing of seven despite my bias. But really, I definately don't like country, it's a withering music style in my opinion, hangin by the thread of nostalgic hillbilly prom memories of Billy-Jake Roe snaking his hand underneath the skirt of his friends sister a year younger than he, but her bra's packed enough to let a lot of things slide with the aid of some potato gin.
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.178.253.120	7-Jun-04/2:27 PM
Cute, at first I thought this was about dialects. English speaking russians calling a window (windauge/ vindoge) and Irish speakers call window (windeye/windaeeii). Then I realised wineye is the literal interpretation of the german (I'm guessing german (the language of much of Austria)) window. So in fact eye = wind x eye to (soul). Like the title too, there must be loads of these instances.
Re: USS Pride by DR Limerick	richa 81.178.253.120	7-Jun-04/2:38 PM
Always use multiple exclamation marks, that way the words don't have to do the work. Ace idea
Re: USS Pride by DR Limerick	DR Limerick 62.31.23.38	7-Jun-04/2:57 PM
Thank you!!!! with this sort of limerick its not to be picked and poked at. whats wright and wrong. just use you head to picture the seen!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	DR Limerick 62.31.23.38	7-Jun-04/3:00 PM
good poem 7/10
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.163.181	7-Jun-04/3:05 PM
Fishin always seemed to me an excuse to idle lazily with some beer, a joint, and a couple sandwiches. Ones pole is subconciously held, with its lure floating to the side, tugged by the current; an image utilized as a commonly-accepted disguise. Oh, and just maybe you'll be able to irritate the girlie back home who wrinkles her nose at the sight of a bottom-feeder hangin from a rusted lure by askin her to cook it for supper. Anyway, its an eight to me, your style has changed a bit in this piece, or maybe thats just me bein delusional.