Re: A life unsure by sliver	titan69 62.31.23.38	7-Jun-04/12:50 PM
yak. i have read better from you.no vote sorry!
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/1:35 PM
Pretty funny, was a good read for me. Then again, these kinds of pieces always get my juices goin. You are blessed with nine.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/1:37 PM
I wouldn't call it spectacular, but I wouldn't call it horrible either. It's a tad dull, in my opinion. You've been blessed with eight.
Re: A life unsure by sliver	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/1:40 PM
It had some good parts mostly, but theres a lot of wrinkles that weaken its effect. You've been blessed with seven.
Re: Hollywierd by INTRANSIT	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/1:44 PM
This reminds me of my odd rantings. It began pretty well, but the end wasn't very satisfactory for me. Felt and looked like you just tapered off after "Mr. President" You've been blessed with eight.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/1:47 PM
Well, I like how its beginning to form so far, but since it's unfinished, I'm unable to give anything higher than an eight.
Re: USS Pride by DR Limerick	Sasha 69.138.236.63	7-Jun-04/1:49 PM
"her" has long ceased to be viable as a reflexive pronoun.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/1:52 PM
Shin, I feel as if I've entered a bubble of vagueness despite the cliche familiarity of that line "eye: window to the soul." I'm left floating, face bewildered, scratchin my itchin dome. No Vote.
Re: Le Sommeil- Slumber by Sasha	SupremeDreamer 204.31.171.86	7-Jun-04/1:59 PM
Is this translation something that you've actually written? 'Cause if so, the classic flare isn't doin jack for me really. And if you didn't write this yourself, then why do you post it's translation? Not here to feel as if I'm looking over literature assignments, but these translations have that effect 'pon me. That said, I'll be reserving my vote for now. Hope you don't take my comment badly- I can't help being an ass since it's a part of my bloated pride.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	6-Jun-04/8:49 PM
This ones got a good flow. It'd got well with music.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	6-Jun-04/8:54 PM
As a translation, it's Ace. I'm just still having trouble with the whole voting for translations as original work thing. Oh well.
regarding some deleted poem...	<~> 64.252.171.17	7-Jun-04/12:36 AM
what have you changed, in this version?
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	7-Jun-04/8:48 AM
I can not believe I dragged my huge ball sack to my desk and scrolled down to poemranker to read this solid excretory product evacuated from Shin Shuu's bowels. What a wheelbarrow of pretentious ordure.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.68	7-Jun-04/9:26 AM
*BELCH* as he picks wings from his teeth.
Re: wibble wibble honk by pain killer	pain killer 217.159.74.253	7-Jun-04/11:40 AM
this is the best poem ever posted by anyone anywhere ever zodiac....mate of horus8 horus8 king of the poemranker notice board/sad sack of shite delete where appropriate
Re: Solipsistic, Drunk, But Still Friends by horus8	pain killer 217.159.74.253	7-Jun-04/11:50 AM
hey horus8...you're quite good actually hah got you you're rubbish mate horus8..got no life got no mates apart from that zodiac dude and he doesn't count horus8 doesn't like angry chickens and uses words like solipsistic in his poems in the vain hope it makes him appear big and clever it doesn't solipsistic is one of THOSE words like asphalt i bet he's used that in one of his poems too i bet he's never used angry chickens i bet he's never been published i bet he's old,ugly and frustated he doesn't like me he doesn't like angry chickens he doesn't intimidate me i'm back boys have fun oh and one more thing parallels twotter
regarding some deleted poem...	titan69 62.31.23.38	7-Jun-04/12:46 PM
oh you are realy gone this time man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	sliver 63.189.16.228	6-Jun-04/7:51 PM
I'm looking forward to reading obituary to the moon. That makes it hrd to speak on this piece. I see that you are a musician. read a few af mine and let me know if I have any hope as a lyricist?
Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco	sliver 63.189.16.228	6-Jun-04/7:55 PM
Sloppy what? Nothing I saw....10,10.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.189.16.228	6-Jun-04/8:07 PM
I can see her, silouetted on the shore, pearlessence. In the fog. And I can understand. But those mountains have an addiction. I know, I live in the shadows of the falling sun. I love.