regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	5-Jun-04/11:47 AM
Nice to see you again, lady.
Re: Tomorrow's Dance by RevHydra	RevHydra 172.143.13.97	5-Jun-04/10:04 PM
I think its time for some heroin...
Re: Silly Get by DR Limerick	DR Limerick 213.48.172.8	5-Jun-04/11:30 PM
were ar my votes!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	titan69 213.48.172.8	5-Jun-04/11:28 PM
I just dont buy it joe?
regarding some deleted poem...	edwardo 198.53.203.36	6-Jun-04/1:46 AM
Brilliant! Truly cutting-edge SOC. Firstly, a sensual vision, but then, an ironic forray into post-modern awareness; I like it.
Re: why I hate politics by edwardo	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165	6-Jun-04/6:28 AM
Well Ed, I think you've got some of us piqued. I think this needs more. But that's me.
Re: and you by edwardo	INTRANSIT 152.163.252.165	6-Jun-04/6:30 AM
Sometimes, a firecracker resonates like a bomb.
Re: Being Mute by TheVoiceless	herbgirlofbirkenau 142.163.145.103	5-Jun-04/12:04 PM
love the last stanza there are some weak parts such as: "So bland a feeling, Not being able to say… What you feel and think, Needing savior from an ego that consumes." but improve the flow and the poem will improve alot. good job.
regarding some deleted poem...	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	5-Jun-04/12:52 PM
blah blah blah-continue-blah blah blah-please-blah blah blah blah blah. 5. The rest upon delivery.
Re: becoming by <~>	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	5-Jun-04/1:17 PM
Too smart to be a pimple, why? I like the way this rolls but it sounds just abit rap-ish. Should I turn the potentiometer below 33 1/3?
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	5-Jun-04/2:17 PM
The main part that bothered me was "a single pray prayed". I think maybe it should be "a single prayer, prayed"?
Re: A short trip home by titan69	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	5-Jun-04/2:37 PM
Does the figure wear a tall hat? Is it cloaked in a cloak? Is it arm-ed with prawnes? Scary indeed.
Re: A Hick's Rendition of "Fire and Ice" by Enkidu	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	5-Jun-04/2:41 PM
Of the two, this ones funnier. If they ever see a book, they should be on the same page or back to back.
Re: The butchers consolation (Kyrielle) by SupremeDreamer	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.70	5-Jun-04/2:51 PM
Gangs of New York, all gussied up. Listen and fix the hiccups.
Re: Decks of Cards (So Long to the City) by wilco	wilco 24.176.102.131	5-Jun-04/4:02 PM
Just thought I'd try my hand at a country song (I do live in Tennessee, after all).
Re: A new beginning by hobojo	son of the moon 66.11.7.123	5-Jun-04/4:11 PM
ing weakens the verbiage. i want more immediancy from you
Re: Strength by Freethinker1602	son of the moon 66.11.7.123	5-Jun-04/4:20 PM
show me. dont tell me
regarding some deleted poem...	son of the moon 66.11.7.123	5-Jun-04/4:22 PM
i like the premise, but the execution needs work.
Re: paperclips by son of the moon	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	5-Jun-04/4:50 PM
Someone put them in the bin.
Re: asleep in the night by saylor3000	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 131.111.212.215	5-Jun-04/5:10 PM
Tug off again probably.