Re: Don't Say You Understand by cuddlytiger17	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/8:55 PM
I don't understand ;)
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/9:10 PM
Yes Bratsy, you are not alone. Try living with the memories here.
Re: Heaven Out Here by wilco	electroman1979 198.81.26.16	2-Jun-04/9:36 PM
is that what them meaninf of life is to you? sitting around getting tan with a beer? and you think thats why God put you here? how shallow
Re: One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu	electroman1979 198.81.26.16	2-Jun-04/9:41 PM
sheep sheep, we dont wanna hear a peep, keep it to yourself, before i ralf
regarding some deleted poem...	god'swife 4.233.113.87	2-Jun-04/7:49 PM
Is 'is' suppose to be 'as', or is 'grows' suppose to be 'growing'? Otherwise, I think your poem is very good.
regarding some deleted poem...	horus8 24.130.62.63	2-Jun-04/7:55 PM
Cool-Whipe
regarding some deleted poem...	edpeterson 68.20.9.182	2-Jun-04/7:40 PM
what is up with the ones and sixes??? i think this is the best of your poetry that i have read. darkness lurks somewhere in a scene artfully painted.
Re: Piccadilly to Baker Street by Caducus	edpeterson 68.20.9.182	2-Jun-04/7:46 PM
i wont say ugh, but i will say a bit verbose, and the fact that it was intentional doesnt make it any more the readable, sire. courtesy 8
Re: Piccadilly to Baker Street by Caducus	edpeterson 68.20.9.182	2-Jun-04/7:47 PM
and because no way does it deserve the one and the three...need a balance.
Re: Know Me by caitydee	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/8:22 PM
I shall comment caitydee, A nice piece. I hope it worked out.10
Re: The Babe in the Alligator Pajamas by caitydee	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/8:31 PM
Funny how children can make you completely reconsider your idea of life huh? 10
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/8:38 PM
Fanf'ntastic. I could hear the coronet staining in the background and taste the agave worm.
Re: Fire, Water, and Blood by Katzclear	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/8:48 PM
Good imagery,I think tadpole refers to baptism. When ya gonna submit some more?
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/8:49 PM
hmmm.
Re: Know Me by caitydee	horus8 24.130.62.63	2-Jun-04/8:51 PM
Fluff
Re: One O Five in the A.M. by Enkidu	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/9:12 PM
This is poetry? really? don't want to hurt your feelings man, but this don't cut it, not at all. I won't vote
Re: Desire by mk32	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/9:18 PM
SHIT, I think this is going on my favorite list. Thanks.
regarding some deleted poem...	sliver 63.190.65.81	2-Jun-04/9:30 PM
A sad commentary on todays youth.
Re: Heroes of the Rodeo by Amber	electroman1979 198.81.26.16	2-Jun-04/9:35 PM
wow, first, good poem as far as structure, but imagine how much better our society would be if we based our heroism on stuff that mattered? like Saints and living for God. where does rodoe get you after your dead?
Re: Their Song of Peace or Pain by nothingtoanyone	zodiac 65.161.41.48	3-Jun-04/5:13 AM
re: "Monotonous is King and Sorrow is his Queen." Jesus, man! Those aren't even the same species! Just imagine all the deformed forms they would give birth to! Adjenouns! Prepoverbs! Adjunctions!!!1!