Re: a comment on This Time Imperfect by RGSsparky	RGSsparky 128.243.220.21	7-Mar-05/12:29 PM
correction, i havent tried to pass it off as my own, hence my first comment. DICKHEAD!
Re: Beetwen by Dovina	Crakyamuni 131.252.180.210	7-Mar-05/11:37 AM
Who's that folkish painter in the bronx, a latin man? That guy paints with words sometimes to instill the point that our minds have the amazing ability to organize chaos. I like the the concept at the end. I thnk this is nice.
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	Jezabele-In-Hell 65.172.117.1	7-Mar-05/11:09 AM
Excellent. So far the best poem I have ever read!
Re: The Reply by LintyWeenis	edpeterson 68.79.19.251	7-Mar-05/10:56 AM
Can't say I loved the poem, but I cannot give less than a 10 to "LintyWeenis"
Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee	edpeterson 68.79.19.251	7-Mar-05/10:53 AM
Liked it better before. The language seemed clearer. The stuff you have added is interesting, but poorly worded, imho.
Re: Beetwen by Dovina	edpeterson 68.79.19.251	7-Mar-05/10:50 AM
metamorphose? Of course, this is bunk, but you know that. Points for different, but then you could use that fucked up font...what the fuck is it called?............Wingdings, and make it completely illegible.
Re: The Privaleged by i_am_the_popsicle	Dovina 12.72.33.85	7-Mar-05/9:09 AM
I didn't get past the first verse due to spelling.
Re: a comment on Fastso by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.33.85	7-Mar-05/8:49 AM
Funny, most of the ones I know seem jollier than the average person. Poor or not poor seems irrelevant.
Re: a comment on ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad	Dovina 12.72.33.85	7-Mar-05/8:44 AM
Happy to hear you winced.
Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee	Dovina 12.72.33.85	7-Mar-05/8:42 AM
Except for some confusing spacing and "my phone calls are touching," which seems to change the focus, I like it.
Re: Fastso by Dovina	richa 81.178.193.41	7-Mar-05/8:28 AM
I don't think fat people tend to be jolly. I think they tend to be poor and hence have nothing to be jolly about :(
Re: a comment on Fastso by Dovina	richa 81.178.193.41	7-Mar-05/8:27 AM
Fastso if nothing else deserves an award for the most ironic mispelling ever.
Re: a comment on Fastso by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.33.85	7-Mar-05/8:13 AM
Q1: edpeterson, as anyone can see. Q2: A hierarchy of hunger is clearly shown in both Hunger poems, call it what you will. Q3: It’s not about hell. Q4: 0.75 +/- 0.20. 0 is clearly incorrect! Q5: The only useful thing you’ve said in weeks. Q6: I declare myself not sexist and not fatist.
Re: a comment on Fastso by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.33.85	7-Mar-05/8:11 AM
I do apologize for the lipstich with its clearly gay implications for gang members. In the hierarchy of hunger it’s up there with “fatsist” and saying all fat people are not jolly. How do I keep coming up with such nonsense?
Re: a comment on Fastso by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	7-Mar-05/5:26 AM
Q1: Who are you talking to? Q2: "a hierarchy of hunger" is still bullshit, and didn't you tell me that wasn't what you were writing about? Q3: What the hell are you talking about? Q4: regarding, "Unlike other fat boys / her linemate isn’t jolly," what would you guess is the proportion of jolly-fat-people-you-know to non-jolly-fat-people-you-know? Mine's practically zero. So what the hell are you talking about? Q5: Did you mean to spell Fatso as "Fastso"? Why? Q6: In addition to being a sexist again, you're also a fatsist now. Is there any depth you won't sink to? I'll bet not.
Re: Oh! To be pressed against your windowpane by skaskowski	zodiac 212.38.134.51	7-Mar-05/5:12 AM
"part of" bothered me. The rest is really quite good.
Re: The Reply by LintyWeenis	zodiac 212.38.134.51	7-Mar-05/5:10 AM
re "What can I say that hasn't already been said?" A lot of things, if you wrote about anything else :-(
Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee	zodiac 212.38.134.51	7-Mar-05/5:07 AM
I know a Canadian here whose knobs log me off every time.
Re: ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad	zodiac 212.38.134.51	7-Mar-05/2:13 AM
I don't think you get that in limericks the rhyming words are supposed to be funny ones. Or even just odd ones, like - oh I don't know - 'laser,' 'Negro,' or 'rupture'.
Re: The Privaleged by i_am_the_popsicle	jessicazee 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/11:06 PM
spelling problems: priveleged luxury coerced 7.9 regardless