Re: a comment on You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee	jessicazee 152.163.100.195	6-Mar-05/10:58 PM
thanks for the ups. I have a new version, the title for now is 'you fell asleep first'...wanted to make it a new one but this site says I have to wait 2_hours_...I might be in my attic drinking whiskey by then...
Re: Fastso by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.106	6-Mar-05/9:41 PM
Must U rite such gay poems allathe time? Do you know that they make lipstick out of suet? "suety gang..."
Re: Oh! To be pressed against your windowpane by skaskowski	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/6:00 PM
i like it - 8 -
Re: White Lie by ErgoErgun	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/5:59 PM
i hope that the point of this simply went over my head and that it isnt as bad as i think it is - 5 -
Re: Of Pride and Climate by MacFrantic	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/5:55 PM
i really like this
Re: a comment on The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp	whispern_smoke_wisp 152.163.100.195	6-Mar-05/4:18 PM
thanks - im not so good at spelling (i should probably work on that) -zarina
Re: a comment on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp	whispern_smoke_wisp 152.163.100.195	6-Mar-05/4:15 PM
thanks! -zarina
Re: a comment on ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad	Goad 217.82.10.13	6-Mar-05/3:58 PM
...well, it IS certainly politically incorrect enough to make even me wince as I posted it.
Re: a dialouge between a pessimst and a young child by whispern_smoke_wisp	LintyWeenis 205.188.117.9	6-Mar-05/3:56 PM
Dialogue between a broken record player and a child perhaps. -you are not a genius- I know you are but what am I? Doesn't do it for me. Who knows, maybe I'm missing the point completely. I hope I am.
Re: a comment on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle	Goad 217.82.10.13	6-Mar-05/3:54 PM
lol, do you think the above posters are god-fearing conservatives? you should perhaps read their posting history. They are trashing your muddled thinking, not your point of view. Talk about missing the point completely.
Re: ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad	LintyWeenis 205.188.117.9	6-Mar-05/3:50 PM
I found it funny, am I wrong?
Re: a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle	i_am_the_popsicle 152.163.100.135	6-Mar-05/3:42 PM
its a shame when a group of poets cannot stand a contrarian view, and then on top of it, completely miss the point of a poem -emyln
Re: a comment on A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp	whispern_smoke_wisp 152.163.100.195	6-Mar-05/12:00 PM
thank you so much! i guess this means I have suceeded then(as a poet) if i've made a reader happy! -zarina
Re: The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp	Plaidypus 68.14.27.48	6-Mar-05/9:34 AM
their should be spelled "there", just to let you know. Also, "loose" should be "lose"
Re: The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp	Plaidypus 68.14.27.48	6-Mar-05/9:32 AM
Agreed!
Re: A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp	Plaidypus 68.14.27.48	6-Mar-05/9:31 AM
I really enjoyed this poem!!
Re: a comment on Forsaken by DevilBuni	zodiac 212.38.134.51	6-Mar-05/7:24 AM
Do you really think we want to read something you haven't put more than a few minutes' effort into?
Re: Advertising says: by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	6-Mar-05/7:17 AM
Why isn't different an adverb?
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	6-Mar-05/7:13 AM
What do you mean by unsupported? The support is that I have practically the only recognized training on the matter in the entire world.
Re: a comment on Hunger by Dovina	zodiac 212.38.134.51	6-Mar-05/7:11 AM
Oh. Well then it might interest you to know that when an Islam is hungry he says 'The birds in my stomach are singing'. Or maybe it won't. In any event, I'm afraid that's the only thing it'll be any use talking to you about now.