Re: ...on the Benefits of Being Ugly by Goad	MacFrantic 205.188.116.67	5-Mar-05/8:59 PM
Good
Re: a comment on Untitled (A Dark Angel Litmus) by Geschäftsreise	Goad 84.140.192.191	5-Mar-05/8:52 PM
*snicker*
Re: a comment on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle	richa 81.178.250.129	5-Mar-05/3:56 PM
That giving birth may seriously harm the mother may well give rise to a mind-parp. However is this mind-parp so cosmically profound that the foetus that is killed is not the same foetus that would have been killed had the labour not been so harmful. I can only hope so.
Re: a comment on Woman on the Stairs by James Rykelangeli	Goad 217.82.3.177	5-Mar-05/1:39 PM
Anapestic is tricky to get It's quite clear you've not mastered it yet. I hope you'd've redacted And were merely distracted 'cuz the newel was making you wet.
Re: one moment to the other by nentwined	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:44 AM
i like this alot -9- your word choice was very nice
Re: The Escape by Geschäftsreise	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:41 AM
um why dont you write a story not a poem, because this comes across as very unskilled and choppy but you might to nicely if you make it into a short story
Re: Foreplay by INTRANSIT	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:38 AM
i like this - 8 -
Re: for sue (20030815) by nentwined	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:28 AM
i love this it doesnt make much sense to me but the sound of it makes it wonderful anyway - 10 -
Re: Decay by INTRANSIT	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:27 AM
i absolutely love this! i honestly have no idea why but i sense a brilliance in it! - 10 -
Re: The drug prayer by Nitroxide	dancin_n_da_moonlite 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/11:25 AM
i like it but it is just a bit long
Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.6.107	5-Mar-05/11:21 AM
On second thought – no.
Re: a comment on Fastso by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.4.71	5-Mar-05/10:53 AM
Sorry to disappoint, but your perception of my repentance is false. Both of my Hunger poems are, in my opinion, not bullshit, but honest commentary on many kinds of hunger and how they intermingle – a hierarchy of hunger. Speaking of intermingling, with so many tadpoles in the pond these days, each belching four pustuled burps before they grow legs or die, perhaps an old cowfrog is a bit of a novelty, wouldn’t you say, Bull?
Re: a comment on Losing To Anatomy by Blindpoetry	Blindpoetry 70.186.160.225	5-Mar-05/10:10 AM
What I sort[of] try to express is that looks are mostly always what people find. And it ends up being horribly wrong once you get to know the good looking fella who ends up being a retarded dumbass. Make sense? ;) But I wrote this poem with something else in mind that even i couldn't really put in words, sort[of].
Re: Simple by wilco	RION12 64.136.26.226	5-Mar-05/10:09 AM
Cool poem.
Re: a comment on March 3,2005/I lost someone by RION12	RION12 64.136.26.226	5-Mar-05/10:04 AM
Thanks for putting it easy on me. I know the poem sucks but like I said in my the poem "I get up to write poetry but this poem is all I got out of me."
Re: Do I Know U? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/9:49 AM
i agree with crooked_smile
Re: What? by DaRkMoOnLuVeR	whispern_smoke_wisp 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/9:48 AM
i agree with i_am_the_popsicle
Re: Nothing And Everything by DaRkMoOnLuVeR	that_funny_girl 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/9:43 AM
i agree with i_am_the_popsicle - 6 -
Re: His Light by DevilBuni	that_funny_girl 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/9:35 AM
i agree basically with crooked_smile - but like it a little bit less - 4 -
Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee	that_funny_girl 205.188.116.135	5-Mar-05/9:33 AM
i agree with crooked_smile - 10 -