Re: a comment on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp	whispern_smoke_wisp 152.163.100.195	7-Mar-05/4:23 PM
thanks :) -zarina
Re: a comment on Sleep does my eyes by nentwined	nentwined 64.60.192.130	7-Mar-05/4:23 PM
I'm glad it does. I like to find a trickling, bouncing, burbling rhythm in everything. Dance, really. But dance is music. :)
Re: Severed by shadowaura	that_funny_girl 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/4:17 PM
i give this a 10 because it is good, but i must ask why you included your age - it doesnt really make any difference at all how old you are - and it just seems to give the impressions that want almost a pity vote, for being younger than the rest of us -nessa
Re: nothing could by nentwined	that_funny_girl 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/4:13 PM
intersting...... -nessa
Re: The Muses by crooked_smile	DevilBuni 149.152.192.18	7-Mar-05/4:13 PM
That has to be the longest poem about not being able to write a poem I've ever read.
Re: Letter Harmony by webguy	i_am_the_popsicle 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/4:10 PM
i love this - 10 - -emlyn
Re: Care by aurora	i_am_the_popsicle 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/4:00 PM
seems more like a pimple poem ...... -emlyn
Re: an early discovery (reworking) by richa	i_am_the_popsicle 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/3:59 PM
i like it - 9 - -emlyn
Re: Doesn't Take Much by Plaidypus	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/3:53 PM
absolutely excellent - 10 - -megan
Re: Death is a Three Step Process by dancin_n_da_moonlite	richa 81.178.193.41	7-Mar-05/3:52 PM
sad noess depres sion suic ide. Got ya. Probably a bit ambitious to do an acrostic in this manner and have it make sense.
Re: a comment on Death is a Three Step Process by dancin_n_da_moonlite	dancin_n_da_moonlite 152.163.100.195	7-Mar-05/3:47 PM
i am afraid you have misunderstood my acrostic includes all the words not just the first of each line
Re: The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp	DevilBuni 149.152.192.18	7-Mar-05/3:45 PM
reminds me of a poem I wrote :) Very nice
Re: The Ode of Human Life by ShaNoN+960317485	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/3:44 PM
interesting - 7 - -lia
Re: Disfigure by DevilBuni	Dovina 12.72.6.27	7-Mar-05/3:44 PM
It's far fetched, but with enough truth to consider developing.
Re: trapoide by Angel_of_fait	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/3:41 PM
this i don't feel was all that good - 5 - -lia
Re: Pilgrim by richa	Dovina 12.72.6.27	7-Mar-05/3:41 PM
Snake heaven may have tall golden canes, but virgins for the Pilgrim Puritans? And that last verse with its semicolon and new sentence midway, well, look at the grammar.
Re: What am I doing? by INTRANSIT	crooked_smile 152.163.100.135	7-Mar-05/3:41 PM
this was interesting - and if flowed nicely - 8 - -lia
Re: Death is a Three Step Process by dancin_n_da_moonlite	richa 81.178.193.41	7-Mar-05/2:46 PM
Sudden Death Syndrome. Don't get the rest of it though.
Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee	richa 81.178.193.41	7-Mar-05/2:40 PM
Should have kept ethnic studies. This is pretty much prose as well so there was little need for all the flashy effects. Not bad.
Re: a comment on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	7-Mar-05/1:32 PM
One name: Bono. and I aint talkin' Sonny.