Re: a comment on Advertising says: by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 69.231.115.76	2-Mar-05/11:37 AM
You forget (Curry+toothache+beer)/2 in your equation-- but you're right anyway. Perhaps curry = 0.
Re: a comment on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 12.72.4.242	2-Mar-05/10:47 AM
Does yak shit crawl? Of course not. Everyone knows that. He knows that, just as he knows the difference between a training braw and his gentleman wearing it.
Re: a comment on Advertising says: by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.4.242	2-Mar-05/10:33 AM
Suckers all. I fall for the Budweiser Bears. They make me want to drink Bud.
Re: a comment on Advertising says: by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.4.242	2-Mar-05/10:31 AM
You are at your best when you do the pathos, or would you prefer I said, “worst.” (Curry + White Car + Home by 9) /3 = two hours typing, then TV (Ennui + TV) / 2 = Sleep. (Toothache + Beer) /2 = Sweet Dreams +/- 20% contingency
Re: spiders and butterflies by Mona Lisa	Dreammaker1024 198.146.102.83	2-Mar-05/9:25 AM
Interesting view.
Re: Advertising says: by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.218.59.188	2-Mar-05/8:44 AM
You are at your best when you do the math. The feeling I get from this poem is “Ennui and TV.”
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.6.138	2-Mar-05/6:42 AM
It's neither plagiarism nor indecent to write a story told to me in the first person, but you already knew that.
Re: a comment on Don't Ask, Don't Tell by PodPoet	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	2-Mar-05/5:30 AM
Angels don't have members. They're sexless: "At the resurrection people will neither marry nor be given in marriage; they will be like the angels in heaven." Matthew 22:30
Re: a comment on Don't Ask, Don't Tell by PodPoet	edpeterson 68.79.203.220	2-Mar-05/5:22 AM
Is it true that dark angels have larger members than their lighter counterparts?
Re: Don't Ask, Don't Tell by PodPoet	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	2-Mar-05/3:39 AM
Is gayness a systemic problem in the Marines? Or are they merely blighted by a few bad eggs? The omelette that is homosexualism is rotten indeed, and like all rotten omelettes it spreads, planting new omelette seeds wherever its omelette legs may carry it. Make no mistake: omelettism is more than just a pertinent analogy, it's a fact of life. All that's left is for us to ask ourselves, "How do we stamp out a breeding omelette?" Simple. We place it in the middle of The Bible, and slam the book shut. Case closed. Omelette absorbed. -10-
Re: The Artist by Dreammaker1024	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	2-Mar-05/12:48 AM
By all accounts, Black mothers are ace. The same cannot be said of Black fathers, who seem to get a lot of bad press. "The majority of African American children live in homes without their fathers." Similar parps ring true in the Afro Carribean community in Britain. Three questions pull down their trousers and vault out of all this muss: Who is responsible? What can be done about it? And who on Earth is going to put it into action?
Re: For Junior by PodPoet	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	1-Mar-05/11:54 PM
Love/Above List http://jowls.org/cgi-bin/wiki/wiki.pl?Poemeranker/Love-Above_List Prayer of life (Other) by njuGold In weakness, in suffering, and mercy to love More spiritually, more gracefully as below and much as above Was it Me?? (Free verse) by ga_writer You were my angel sent from above, Sent here for me to shower you with my love. Angel (Free verse) by Butterfly1120 She to me is an angel. One sent from up above. Here to give, and not recieve, someone with so much love. The meaning of Love (Free verse) by The Slender Blade What is this? An angel in heaven? No, this is love, From the skies above. Child of my Buttocks (Lyric) by -=Dark_Angel=- For Jesu's legendary scorn Is pitiful, and flawed by Love. The greatest anguish from Above Song For My Soulmate (Lyric) by John K Have you ever seen to people madly in love? They've been given a gift from their God above. Forbidden Love (Ode) by crystal lane swift I know He is watching from above, Is our moment all a dream? Why must this be a forbidden love? Am I Good Enough? (Free verse) by crystal lane swift I want nothing more than for you to return my love. I write pretty lines for you about the heavens above. An Angel (Lyric) by broken_wing11 An angel walked thru the gates today Into His heavens up above An angel has been blessed She left us with her love A.E.G. (Free verse) by nowhereman How can you say you feel no love for me, I hold you so high above Goodbye (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey Maybe someday he'll find true love Just know "sunshine" will be watching from above. Sent from Above (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly Time passed and we spoke move and soon we fell in love And in my heart I knew it was true this love was from above Essential Love (Other) by CharismaAllOver when God made you, God made love from high in heaven high above. Good Love (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w what makes a good love does it come from above I Love You (Free verse) by babyBOOMER I Will Never Compromise My Love Yet Dreaming Takes Me Far Away Of a Woman Lying above lost love (Free verse) by cherish My head aches from heartaches of my lost love. Also in hopes of one day being together one day up above. Love (Sonnet) by simone_girard I do believe the lord above Created you for me to love Symbol Of Love (Sonnet) by simone_girard So they say goodbye to their symbol of love As their baby moves on to god above You Give Me Love (Free verse) by Free2Rhyme15 The brightest star shinning, in the sky above Is nothing to you the person who gives me love. love 2 (Free verse) by little_angel_maria as i've failed in all of the above, I admit by chance maybe i just fell in love Tragic Love (Sonnet) by WithoutLife A heart that can never be given away To the one I truly love, Must forever wonder astray Was it condemned from above? It's All 'Cause I Love You (Free verse) by Tigger8023 You're the perfect star in the sky above, The one I wish upon with all my love. My One True Love (Lyric) by Hooman We'll reach out to the mystery above, For we have the blessing of our fate, As you are my one and only true love. My Guardian Angel (Limerick) by ramtheman1 I know my mom's in the heavens above, Watching over us all with lots of love. My Angel (Free verse) by baby_d You have proved to be an angel, Sent from heaven above. To bring back to me, The faith I had lost in Love. The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') (Pimple) by scitz I have fell deep in love, She’s an Angel from the sky above. LIKE AN ANGEL (Free verse) by jeremy bjelland She has lots of love, Just like an angel from above. Angel (Lyric) by mistaric You’re an angel, Sent from up above You’re an angel, You’re the one I love Little Fly (Other) by PodPoet Spread the germ known as love Sent from somewhere up above For Junior (Other) by PodPoet Rainbow spreading above As loneliness becomes love
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	1-Mar-05/11:32 PM
Then you could at least have the common decency to plagiarise his life story in the third person.
Re: The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	edpeterson 68.79.203.220	1-Mar-05/12:28 PM
A mountainous mass of crawling yak shit. You, sir, would not know a gentleman from a training bra. I bid you good day!
Re: spiders and butterflies by Mona Lisa	Dovina 12.72.9.138	1-Mar-05/12:03 PM
The last verse seems overdone, otherwise pretty good.
Re: a comment on For Junior by PodPoet	Dovina 12.72.9.138	1-Mar-05/11:57 AM
Beware of the inevitable letdown after a high. Beware of comments like the one below. Beware of 10-votes that are not meant as 10. And most of all, beware of writing poetry.
Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.9.138	1-Mar-05/11:50 AM
Can you read this? Really?
Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.9.138	1-Mar-05/11:48 AM
That’s what we call in the trade a cliché, old hat, trite, obvious when it was first said, boring then, boring now. Hey mofo, what about the poem?
Re: Advertising says: by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.139	1-Mar-05/10:31 AM
It's a catch to it all,we all have been a sucker for Advertisement sometime in our life.
Re: a comment on In My Arms by jroday	jroday 204.215.33.139	1-Mar-05/10:14 AM
Thank's D my mind is really not on a poem right now. My father-in-law just passed away last week, and I could'nt go, because the flight was to long for me due to my illness.al-naafisyh and her brothers went.