| Re: a comment on Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.117.237.2 |
28-Feb-05/8:23 PM |
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Depends on whom is getting ready, and what they are preparing for.
<3 Jason
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| Re: a comment on Itâs the Management by Dovina |
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50 |
28-Feb-05/5:34 PM |
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| Re: A Song for Laura by somemorepoetry |
DevilBuni 149.152.192.18 |
28-Feb-05/5:06 PM |
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The first stanza kind of sounds a little forced and parts dont really make sense.
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| Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.6.113 |
28-Feb-05/2:42 PM |
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Thank you so much for your confidence in my work evidenced by only now noticing a cracking (of course, no pun intended), but I have not cracked, unless trying new ways of expression is a kind of insanity.
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| Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.6.113 |
28-Feb-05/2:42 PM |
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He who has eyes to see, let him see.
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| Re: a comment on Hunger 2 by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.6.113 |
28-Feb-05/2:33 PM |
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LISP, the language of AutoCad and other graphic applications.
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| Re: a comment on Itâs the Management by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.6.113 |
28-Feb-05/2:32 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Itâs the Management by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.6.113 |
28-Feb-05/2:31 PM |
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I made the boss man male because he is a man. I believe I could have written it with a woman boss, but that's not the way it was. Could you have written this story with either gender as protagonist or would you just let it pass if the boss were a woman?
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| Re: a comment on Hunger by Dovina |
Dovina 12.72.6.113 |
28-Feb-05/2:22 PM |
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You make it much more complecated than it is. Both of your suggestions are much too difficult.
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| Re: a comment on I Love You by Blindpoetry |
Blindpoetry 68.227.130.156 |
28-Feb-05/1:11 PM |
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a head.
loco in the head.
Retarded, stupid, crazy in the head.
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| Re: a comment on I Love You by Blindpoetry |
edpeterson 68.79.203.220 |
28-Feb-05/1:09 PM |
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what the fuck is a cavasa?
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| Re: a comment on I Love You by Blindpoetry |
Blindpoetry 68.227.130.156 |
28-Feb-05/12:52 PM |
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No. It's that Dark Bagel. And his AIDs obsession or whatever.
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| Re: a comment on Last Time by DevilBuni |
DevilBuni 149.152.192.18 |
28-Feb-05/10:42 AM |
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I understand and thank you for your comment...just one thing doesnt make sense to me.
Part B: wtf does this have to do with me? Are you saying you have a problem with my nick? Please refrain from commenting my handle and stick to the poetry.
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| Re: a comment on Getting Pumped Up to Get Laid by PodPoet |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
28-Feb-05/8:33 AM |
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And you need to be made airtight by three men of different socio-economic backgrounds.
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| Re: a comment on Background Noise by Plaidypus |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
28-Feb-05/8:28 AM |
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It's a real shame you can't take criticism without resorting to base insults.
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| Re: a comment on Background Noise by Plaidypus |
Plaidypus 68.14.27.48 |
28-Feb-05/7:31 AM |
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At first I was hurt by this comment...then I read YOUR poetry, and realized you hadn't gone through puberty yet...
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| Re: Homecoming Parade by wilco |
INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67 |
28-Feb-05/6:14 AM |
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I like it too. another kind of parade might make me happier. unless it's supposed to carry the undertones of war. Say, any relation to the "band" wilco?
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| Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
28-Feb-05/5:31 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Faith by Dovina |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
28-Feb-05/5:28 AM |
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| Re: Hunger 2 by Dovina |
Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199 |
28-Feb-05/5:25 AM |
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You have finally cracked.
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