Re: Ode by James Rykelangeli	Dovina 12.72.14.72	27-Feb-05/6:31 AM
Very funny and nicely done. It makes me laugh at myself. Welcome to Poemranker.
Re: How Do I Become a Poet? (with John B. Benitez) by Vince Dolamando	Dovina 12.72.14.72	27-Feb-05/6:25 AM
Poetry is something you read after you have written it and eliminated the obvious mistakes. It's a fine point I know, but try to master it.
Re: Homecoming Parade by wilco	Dovina 12.72.14.72	27-Feb-05/6:05 AM
Thought provoking. I can hear it with an acoustic guitar from a coffee house stool. Not bad.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.14.72	27-Feb-05/5:55 AM
A blatant and predictably sexist response.
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	27-Feb-05/2:49 AM
9/11 was a tradegy for all concerned. But I think the term "boss man" contains redundancy, because all bosses are men by default. You might also consider replacing "lesser" with "female" :( -no vote-
Re: Oh holy shit by Lucifer	James Rykelangeli 169.229.90.109	27-Feb-05/1:49 AM
A superb commentary on the mindset of today's international youth culture. Your vulgarity and absurdly emphasized rhyme scheme are in perfect keeping with their vulgar sexuality and lack of culture. Sublime.
Re: Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom	James Rykelangeli 169.229.90.109	27-Feb-05/1:19 AM
your imagery is pretty but vague and empty. specify. excise the banal phraseology: "connect the dots," "secrets... hidden in plain view." overall, though, with potential.
Re: Forest Rain by bamf909	wilco 24.165.207.93	26-Feb-05/8:47 PM
One of the better Haikus I've seen in a while.
Re: a comment on I Love You by Blindpoetry	some deleted user 64.136.26.226	26-Feb-05/7:29 PM
Green Day is ok. I guess but they do kind of suck. Sorry RION12 I have to go with Blindpoetry.DON'T HURT ME LATER!!!!!
Re: a comment on I Love You by Blindpoetry	RION12 64.136.26.226	26-Feb-05/7:18 PM
Fuch you. If you think Green Day sucks you suck because they are great.
Re: As The Days Turn to Months by DevilBuni	Dovina 12.72.7.170	26-Feb-05/5:24 PM
The first 2 verses say it all and pretty well. Consider dropping the last.
Re: a comment on Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro	Dovina 12.72.7.170	26-Feb-05/5:18 PM
That link - it's a good read.
Re: a comment on Forest Rain by bamf909	bamf909 4.254.219.192	26-Feb-05/9:59 AM
Thanks for the link. That was quite an informative site.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.4.80	26-Feb-05/7:05 AM
I'm gonna repost it, and make it clearer.
Re: Last Time by DevilBuni	Dovina 12.72.4.80	26-Feb-05/6:58 AM
You must forgive INTRANSIT. He drives long hours in a semi on coffee. Don't get me wrong, his suggestions are good, and you'd do well to pay attention. But overall, you've got a good theme here.
Re: a comment on Hunger by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.4.80	26-Feb-05/6:51 AM
You recently told someone that the 10 you gave him was the only sincere 10 you gave that day. Perhaps your comment flows from the same kind of reasoning that uses “your” as a contraction for “you are” because it’s “funny.” Or maybe it’s from the sort of logic that posits an implied proposition in this poem and than rents in vulgarities on the falsity of your straw man. Or the same kind of insight that claims world hunger as a an argument against what this poem is saying. Oh, guru of sensibility and logic, please teach on.
Re: Rough Translation (Prose) by William Alfaro	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	26-Feb-05/6:43 AM
it's good to get this out of your system, but... http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=37680
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.138	26-Feb-05/6:41 AM
yes maam. gonna post a comment on alfies poem. Introduce an old poet. You might find it helpful. I still go here sometimes.
Re: a comment on It’s the Management by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.4.80	26-Feb-05/6:38 AM
G'mornin' T-Driver. If your "Boss" comment above means that you think the boss in this pooem is a boss boss then you are the only one who thinks it means what I think it means.
Re: a comment on Jack and Jill by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.4.80	26-Feb-05/6:31 AM
Friends anymore? My God, if that was friendship, what horrors lie ahead?