Re: The Voice by jroday	Bhaskaryya 202.63.190.228	25-Feb-05/9:54 PM
Has a lyrical rhythm to it and I wonder if this would do better as lyrics rather than free verse poem, due to some inconsistency in line breaks and rhyme schemes. It was an enjoyable read nonetheless and the matter was great. Verdict: Beautiful!
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	wilco 24.165.207.93	25-Feb-05/8:29 PM
Finally, something on the best list that deserves to be there. Well, at least until some anonymous fucking idiot knocked it off. *sigh* Oh well, one day all will be right.
Re: Corner Shop, 5 Quinton Road by Caducus	wilco 24.165.207.93	25-Feb-05/8:25 PM
Not your best by a long shot, but still pretty good.
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	25-Feb-05/8:24 PM
We had an earthquake here a week or so ago. People just sat there with stupid looks on their faces until it was over. I'm telling you, if the big one ever does hit the New Madrid Fault, there's going to be a lot of dead fuckers around here.
Re: Into the Wreckage by zodiac	wilco 24.165.207.93	25-Feb-05/8:17 PM
Wow, I just read three good poems in a row. I don't know what to do....
Re: domination by midnight	DevilBuni 149.152.192.18	25-Feb-05/7:32 PM
I really like enjoyed this poem :) Very nice
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.185	25-Feb-05/2:39 PM
Boss Man! Your fried!
Re: The Voice by jroday	al-naafiysh 204.215.33.185	25-Feb-05/2:35 PM
You know some of these people don't understand what the hell you are saying
Re: Untitled by MacFrantic	Dovina 12.72.5.162	25-Feb-05/6:59 AM
Line 2: sayest is singular, they plural. Line 3: use "thee" to stay with the old English. Line 4: the beat is off. Try morn delays. That's as far as I got. You've got the old (yawn)English voice alright.
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67	25-Feb-05/6:44 AM
Boss.
Re: Corner Shop, 5 Quinton Road by Caducus	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.67	25-Feb-05/6:41 AM
Well, you sent me to the dictionary. 3 points. I'm okay with girning and cantering, damson is a reach. 2 points. The construction is overall solid. 2 points. The puntuation is good,somethings fishy about the opening line. Maybe a bit run on. It's also visually well balanced. 2 points. It's definitely worth "finishing".
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	edpeterson 68.79.203.220	25-Feb-05/6:06 AM
The poem: Brilliant. The order is perfect as is the length.
Re: a comment on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	edpeterson 68.79.203.220	25-Feb-05/5:44 AM
ahhh, but without length, you get no work in the porn industry
Re: Corner Shop, 5 Quinton Road by Caducus	Caducus 172.212.169.203	25-Feb-05/3:19 AM
I'm such a bastard should i keep it open and add it to my woefully low 'happy' collection.
Re: It’s the Management by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.245	25-Feb-05/2:26 AM
Same damn thing happens here in Florida.When we get a hurricane warning, and they tell everyone to seek shelter. Management will tell some of there workers if they don't come to work there fired, and you have some fools that will try to go.
Re: a comment on Invisible Wounds by Fearlesfan_04	edpeterson 68.79.203.220	24-Feb-05/8:31 PM
while we are saying the truth, let me just say you strike me as a very upstanding young man, albeit a slobbering epileptic simp
Re: Night Work by forestchild7	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:13 PM
Are u a writer....i mean do you write stories? this was kool..kind of
Re: Extra Strength VaginexII (Free curse) by Wurt Kale by Shardik	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:11 PM
Damn...this shit is nasty
Re: Mother you are not winter! by kawakurdi	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:07 PM
Awwwww this is sad
Re: Captured Moment by hummers86	Fearlesfan_04 129.66.1.202	24-Feb-05/7:04 PM
Great theme