Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.18	19-Feb-05/10:20 AM
Yes I do!
Re: Step Up by Blindpoetry	Dovina 12.72.8.90	19-Feb-05/10:16 AM
The first verse is great, but what happens next? Misspelling and misgrammar to be sure, but what are you saying?
Re: a comment on Rusty knife to the kidney by INTRANSIT	Dovina 12.72.8.90	19-Feb-05/10:12 AM
Don't know about Ezra, but the guy with a rustily severed kidney isn't laughing. To me it's poetry. Can't say why, just is.
Re: Dustin(Incomplete) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	MacFrantic 64.12.116.67	19-Feb-05/9:41 AM
Hey! That name is my own, without the whole (incomplete) deal.
Re: I AM NOT CONTAINED BY THIS UNIVERSE by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 217.218.131.165	19-Feb-05/9:19 AM
I AM NOT CONTAINED BY THIS UNIVERSE
Re: a comment on Rusty knife to the kidney by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.138	19-Feb-05/7:39 AM
When I thought of it, I laughed too. Then a Grinch like grin came over me. But is it poetry? Would Ezra Pound laugh at it? Or would he laugh at it.
Re: a comment on Garage sale by INTRANSIT	Dovina 12.72.10.8	19-Feb-05/6:53 AM
Only if he or she is a sexist.
Re: Rusty knife to the kidney by INTRANSIT	Dovina 12.72.10.8	19-Feb-05/6:36 AM
Wow, bet he never fixates again. Comes from the Bible story about woman made from the rib of man. Had to laugh, hope you meant it funny.
Re: For Elizabeth, Wherever She May Be by wilco	Dovina 12.72.10.8	19-Feb-05/6:32 AM
No, I couldn't stay mad. It's a pretty good poem no matter how old you are. It had more to do with some unrelated baloney. I hope you’ve got sunny days wherever you are.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.10.8	19-Feb-05/6:22 AM
He'll be so impressed with your progress. Good work.
Re: If God Was a Nihilist by baughworm	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67	19-Feb-05/5:40 AM
Seems to get rolling, then stalls. Encore? Maybe check the definition of nihilist. I'm not sure.
Re: a comment on Summing Up by Dovina	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.138	19-Feb-05/5:17 AM
Or just alter it a little. The major part suggests he's dead. The minor suggests he went to another woman. Wha'd you get?
Re: Brother's Egg Book by Jeremi B. Handrinos	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.67	19-Feb-05/5:15 AM
Something tells me this is a one-timer, pure. I'd leave it if it is.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.153.196.50	19-Feb-05/3:59 AM
So do you agree with me that praying during an examination should be forbidden?
Re: Summing Up by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.89	19-Feb-05/3:21 AM
Love the poem, keep'em coming.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	jroday 204.215.33.89	19-Feb-05/3:07 AM
" He that worketh deceit shall not dwell within my house: he that telleth lies shall not tarry in my sight... He also says you reap what you sow, obviously they are praying to a false god, and the only other person I know would put a thought like that in someones head is the devil.
Re: a comment on Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom	thepinkbunnyofdoom 66.42.248.169	19-Feb-05/1:36 AM
Special, yeah. That what my mommy says any way yepper roni I'm mommy's special boy uh huh I am.
Re: a comment on Never... by jessicazee	jessicazee 152.163.101.5	19-Feb-05/1:05 AM
thanks for the comments...probably silly because I wrote it on my birthday after I sprained my ankle, which I don't really remember..I need to edit...
Re: The Critical and His Horse by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 64.12.116.67	19-Feb-05/12:31 AM
I thank you to no limit.
Re: PG Naughty by Miggy	horus8 24.130.62.63	19-Feb-05/12:22 AM
Congratulations on inventing the Christian yogurt enema.