Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams	Goad 217.226.20.184	31-Jan-05/5:36 PM
There once was a pome masturbatory that tried to tell some dumb nymph's little story but there's nothing on google to show it's not new, go check, you'll see it ain't stolen glory!
Re: a comment on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.19	31-Jan-05/5:31 PM
Why does that comment have such a sarcastic effect on me... spank my ass, stop kissing it. Or atleast get down, dirty 'n constructive. Throw me a freakin bone here man. Ten has lost its almighty value due to an efflusion of counterfeit. (curse my verbosity cane...)
Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	Brittanyy 152.163.100.135	31-Jan-05/5:26 PM
Wait...what? I...I don't get it..Probably all that weed I smoked earlier..Oh well..I'll grant you with a 10..The rule on this site seems to be that all good poems are confusing with all the big..words..and stuff..anyways...Always pass the dutch to the left..Cuz the right way is wrong..PEACE
Re: a comment on Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	SupremeDreamer 66.2.5.19	31-Jan-05/5:23 PM
Thank you for not kissing my hairy pimpled ass with a ten. I felt like no one was going to be honest, or objective with the critique... trying to balance it out with Darkie regurgitating his rotating list of english idioms for the phrase "you're retarded." isn't all-together pleasant. It's pitiful when you get tens for something you wrote which you yourself can not rate higher than eight. Feels like folks are proffering gifts of peace to curb my wicked mood swings from belittling their posts. I think I'm due for a general public ranker flogging... Darkie keeping vigilance with his embrowned maturity harness queers the otherwise benefitial by-product of the whole ordeal.
Re: Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams	Goad 217.226.20.184	31-Jan-05/5:18 PM
Hmm, so just what IS this "depth of illusion" painter's muse? an allusion? delusion? ..ah no, it's in BD's pants, you see it's his little fantasy -- that he has while he rubs his protrusion.
Re: On the Discovery of Cinder Cats and The Road More Traveled by MacFrantic	Goad 217.226.20.184	31-Jan-05/5:05 PM
There was a reader who claimed his frustration because twixt the limericks there was no relation. But he shouldn't complain -- for 't'ain't all who can claim they witnessed dada's revivification!
Re: Never Said Thank You by unouluvme	Beyond_Dreams 67.51.232.76	31-Jan-05/5:03 PM
Yes I agree you have lack of thought in this poem. If you're going to write a poem that everybody writes about you have knock it out of ball feild to make it stand alone and seprate it from the rest. You failed to do that in this poem.
Re: POEM FOR PREPS by Brittanyy	Beyond_Dreams 67.51.232.76	31-Jan-05/4:59 PM
way to many grammer mistakes to take this poem even slightly serious. Sounds a bit angsty and should go under pimple poetry.
Re: a comment on Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams	Beyond_Dreams 67.51.232.76	31-Jan-05/4:48 PM
Yup I agree, I don't usually write poems w/ rhyme, but this sort of came to me and I havn't worked out all the small kinks yet. But I still feel it has some great potential.
Re: a comment on Baghdad Election by Mona Lisa	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223	31-Jan-05/3:52 PM
You've made the mistake of thinking that successive sentences uttered by Dovina will converge on some proposition. In fact they diverge wildly away from all propositions simultaneously.
Re: Baghdad Election by Mona Lisa	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:43 PM
Anyone want to place bets on how long it will be before their new president gets blown up?
Re: Depth of Illusion by Beyond_Dreams	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:39 PM
waaaaaaaaaayy too much rhyme for my taste, and forced in places at that. Kind of pretty though in places.
Re: a comment on In Answer To Your Question by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223	31-Jan-05/3:37 PM
Oh yes how first-year philosophy student of you. Does choice really exist? Will my balls really "pop off" if I don't do my maths homework? If you had half the sense of a walnut in your tiny prawn's sack of a head, you'd have argued along the lines that the more strength one has, the more likely that a muscular spasm will break something, and the more temptation there is to do naughty things with that strength. Of course if you had said those arguments, you would have found some way to buncombe-up everything anyhow, so don't feel too bad. :(
Re: Psalm of Wonder by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:36 PM
Not a bad sentiment here. That God is a funny character. Always doing things to upset the legions of peons that he created. Kind of like an ant farm, we are. Little kid has an ant farm..gets bored, shakes it up and ruins all their tunnels...mmhmm
Re: a comment on Psalm of Wonder by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:35 PM
Zodiac doesn't have emotions.
Re: thoughts on a long lazy day by francis nor capule	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:30 PM
better.
Re: a comment on In Answer To Your Question by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 82.39.21.223	31-Jan-05/3:30 PM
You've been so badly beaked that you've actually retracted into your own balls.
Re: Satan's Pillar: The Wisdom of Heresy. by SupremeDreamer	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:26 PM
That Satan...always tricking people.
Re: a comment on Waiting for October by wilco	wilco 24.165.207.93	31-Jan-05/3:19 PM
Mmm, sorry no. Good guesses though, Z. How's the land of sand, btw?
Re: a comment on On the Discovery of Cinder Cats and The Road More Traveled by MacFrantic	REWellman 69.63.40.81	31-Jan-05/12:53 PM
Why is that? Is there a purpose to linking them together? Why don't you publish them separately. It would make it easier to read and appreciate them without comparing them to each other.