Re: black dog by wilco	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.205.178	21-Jan-05/8:44 AM
Of course it sounds like it's about doggie roadkill but even if it isn't...-10- Good.
Re: a comment on In the Shadows by Beyond_Dreams	SupremeDreamer 216.99.240.154	21-Jan-05/8:20 AM
Actually... I'd get away with the verb as a headline... oi, the sunday headline review.. I should cook up another and start a series... fucking crap, I have so much time and nothing to do, I'm a housecunt who's nemesis is the Idiot-box.. deary me.. wheres my fucking straight razor...
Re: a comment on the pretenders by PopoyMola	SupremeDreamer 216.99.240.154	21-Jan-05/8:16 AM
Er, no bizznatch, I must speak or my breath shant have stirred the universe, you wretched 'n shriveled cunt.
Re: a comment on In the Shadows by Beyond_Dreams	SupremeDreamer 216.99.240.154	21-Jan-05/8:12 AM
Name. Verb would be a bit oddish wouldn't you say, chapp-io?
Re: a comment on Enlightenment by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	21-Jan-05/7:55 AM
Please explain whose Enlightenment so influenced the founding fathers? and please also explain who deposed of slavery first; was it the Clapham bretheren or John Brown? then elucidate me as to which nation has the "Mother of Parliaments", took it in the ass from Hitler defending freedom and then blythely looked on as the nation it had spawned developed a greed unsurpassed in human history. Our Gentlemen have achieved a great deal more to improve the state of the world than your colossally mishapen corporate sloths who only appear to be able to look as far as their next grant of options. Your final riposte is as sharp as VioletSuedes features.
Re: a comment on Enlightenment by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.86	21-Jan-05/6:28 AM
The Enlightenment gave rise to the American Experiment, the French Revolution, and the now ubiquitous understanding that all people have intrinsically equal rights to purse happiness. Everywhere except England. Your “gentlemen” are feudal reminder of what our ancestors fought to destroy. And now your prime minister tries to make it all right by latching onto our president like a whining boy to a big brother. No, Sir Robins, your lance is obtund. You live in dreams of dead glory.
Re: Enlightenment by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	21-Jan-05/4:34 AM
Nonsense, the dawn of reason has never been less likely in the U.S.: your President is a religious fanatic and your country is inhabited by moronic zealots. CNBC and Fox news fill your minds up with tripe and as a consequence there is no country in the world as close minded and addicted to a misconceived notion of freedom. No doubt Thomas Jefferson would be happy to see how the dawn of reason had broken across an obese landscape to reveal a country full of be-mulletted half wits travelling from one dispensary of sugary confection to another whilst becrying the joy of living in a land where freedom of thought extends to which Krispy Kreme donught they will fill their fat mouths with next.
Re: The Flower by Bhaskaryya	wilco 24.165.207.93	20-Jan-05/8:05 PM
More showing and less telling. You could say all this much more beautifully with fewer words and a little more specific.
Re: Playfight by fevriere	wilco 24.165.207.93	20-Jan-05/7:40 PM
I guess you just finished reading some Shakespeare?
Re: black dog by wilco	nentwined 64.81.38.95	20-Jan-05/7:40 PM
lamplight's glow ;) definitely a lot of interesting imagery here, though you've lost me with what's going on. someone suggests murder, and I suppose I could see that--but not enough. "black dog" makes me think (of a friend, firstly, but after that) maybe--a hit and run... or a car crash (oil slick, and chasing shadows). Well, the words give me a car crash, the dog makes me think hit and run. Can you tell I'm really, really lost? I'd like a few more crumbs of detail to piece the puzzle together.
Re: The Snow Globe by Caducus	wilco 24.165.207.93	20-Jan-05/5:36 PM
beautifully written, although sad.
Re: Enlightenment by Dovina	wilco 24.165.207.93	20-Jan-05/5:34 PM
in an age of...much better than your last, D.
Re: Blue Executioner by Caducus	wilco 24.165.207.93	20-Jan-05/5:31 PM
well done
Re: Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	wilco 24.165.207.93	20-Jan-05/5:30 PM
I think it's pretty good, but I'd use out of instead of outta.
Re: a comment on Enlightenment by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.115	20-Jan-05/10:50 AM
Oh, Wow, could I have been so cruel as to imply that asses should be kicked?
Re: Enlightenment by Dovina	Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.60	20-Jan-05/8:02 AM
Way to go, Dovina. The only queen America bows to these days is George Michaels. Kick the Brits ass.
Re: a comment on Sounds by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.110	20-Jan-05/6:45 AM
Fascinating indeed
Re: a comment on Sounds by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.110	20-Jan-05/6:45 AM
Thanks for honesty. One sound that will not change is the sound of a fart in church. Maybe I should write about that.
Re: black dog by wilco	Dovina 209.247.222.110	20-Jan-05/6:33 AM
Is it from the dog's pov? The "red on black" line makes me think it's an old dog, and the master needed to kill it as we do with old dogs.
Re: a comment on Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	20-Jan-05/3:32 AM
Yes I do. You silly quim.