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del del delete me!!! come on its easy!!! kill me ill me fulfill me, creature of this site(ha a lil rocky for ya)
yea you should delete this guy, he's a dick
fuzzylogic on Kaleidoscopic (Re-Edit) by Sasha 26 Nov 2004, 11:14 PM
if there was anything lower than a zero, you would recieve it!!! wow another site where ignorence runs rampant. oh well can't blame you, you didn't know better!!! ignorence is bliss
cuddlytiger17 on Love Bruises by Jezabele-In-Hell 26 Nov 2004, 8:23 PM
I guess I can understand why you want the bruises to remain as long as possible; to serve as a reminder, proof. But like Dovina said, it's too plain.
Dovina replying on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 26 Nov 2004, 6:30 PM
I shall make a plaque and hang it above my computer to ever remind of the wisdom I’ve learned this enlightening evening: There is no anything without words, so saying there is no philosophy without them is crap. The words of zodiac
Dovina on The Playground by Caducus 26 Nov 2004, 6:11 PM
Dear Poemranking addicts, How do you get onto poemranker? Over the past five days, I have tried five computers, mac's and PC's, dial-up, DSL, and cable modem, all with no connection to poemranker, or as today only after waiting an hour just to get logged in. The problem is at kaolin's end, and I have emailed him twice, with no answer. I suppose that if he flakes out, dies, or loses the server for some reason, then poemranker and everything on it dies. I wish I had copied more of what seemed important here before the thing died. Now its too late unless by some slim chance it comes back up. Sorry to bleed all over your poem, but it's the only page that came up. I will miss some of you, and think about some you in other ways, Bye, Dovina
Dovina on leaning back to far by celticskatermatt1 25 Nov 2004, 10:18 PM
Too vague and too misspelled.
Dovina on Bitches by blackdeathangel6 25 Nov 2004, 10:16 PM
Funny. bitching about people who bitch.
Dovina on Love Bruises by Jezabele-In-Hell 25 Nov 2004, 10:14 PM
I don't think it's good either. Too plain. And doesn't make sense that you want the bruises to remain. Sorry
Dovina replying on Guinness by Dovina 25 Nov 2004, 9:53 PM
Yes, in "Solitude" I rhymed foe with abode whch stands to this day as one of poemranker's finest and most unusual iambic vowel chimes.
Dovina replying on Guinness by Dovina 25 Nov 2004, 9:44 PM
I omitted a few items from the transcript.
Dovina replying on Guinness by Dovina 25 Nov 2004, 9:40 PM
Only if you decide to interpret it that way.
Jezabele-In-Hell on Love Bruises by Jezabele-In-Hell 25 Nov 2004, 7:22 PM
I don't think it's good..Maybe because I keep reading it over and over...I need some opinions here.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Guinness by Dovina 25 Nov 2004, 6:23 PM
Do any of your poemes rhyme? I just tried going through the rigmarole of checking each one to see, but only got through the first three before thinking "Sod this, I'll just ask her if any of them rhyme". Well? Do they? Nearly all my poemes rhyme.
Dan garcia-Black on Guinness by Dovina 25 Nov 2004, 5:37 PM
This sounds like an accurately kept transcript of the night. The last stanza could be the first and nothing would be lost.
celticskatermatt1 on To Find Peace by travelingsk8er 25 Nov 2004, 5:00 PM
mike this is really stupid but a .........1212121212 thats waht u get
celticskatermatt1 on Guinness by Dovina 25 Nov 2004, 4:57 PM
what a gay poem
zodiac replying on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 24 Nov 2004, 12:12 AM
Jesus. I just found this message and evacuated into my pants. For one thing, no one on this site credits you with too much reason. We credit the human race in general with a capacity for reason - most of which, we're well aware, is regularly and somewhat disgustingly pissed upon by aspiring poetes such as yourself. For another thing, "find fascination" is not a real English construction; rather, it's what I've come to identify as "typically Dovina" - an ignominious category chockfull of such gems as "realized its reciprocal" and "discover all that I've made quite pleasing". For yet another thing, your bumming on about "strictly philosophical" anything, including that bum bum-filled bum of a "strangled verse" above is totally nuts. You'd have done much better to answer -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I.'s comment something like: "Almost any poem I, Dovina, can think of (except my own) is philosophically sound, meaning roughly that it can be regarded using the tools or language of philosophers without being found totally bum," instead of just proving his point. Frost's "The Road not Taken," for example, is more-than-adequately philosophical, proposing as it does that the profit from blindly picking only one of two more-or-less equivalent options (and without later knowing the result of picking the other option) is pretty much unknowable and only in the mind of the chooser, who thinks, man I'm sure lucky I picked this option, I'm a great chooser. And I bet you thought the road less travelled by really does make all the difference. And for another thing, there is no anything without words, so saying there's no philosophy without them is crap and a cheap dis. And for another thing, "the only things we can talk about logically are words and numbers" is simply wrongheaded. We can only talk about anything with words and numbers, so obviously thinking logically about them is pretty important. And for another thing, saying "if so, there is no fun, and without fun, what good is logic." is bum twice-over and mispunctuated. This is essentially equivalent to saying both, "without harnesses and polo horses, there is no fun" AND "without fun, what good is sewage-treatment?" Bum and bum.
SupremeDreamer on Feminist? by RGSsparky 23 Nov 2004, 7:13 PM
Goddamn... thats fucking classic. Ten.
Dovina replying on Dictionary Lesson by Dovina 23 Nov 2004, 6:38 PM
I misspelled blurred.