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Stephen Robins replying on Jesus by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:37 PM
Much as it shames me to say so I find myself agreeing with you. A fully articulated humploaf.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:36 PM
What are you talking about you mad woman. Of course logic can be incorrect. Half of your poems are testament to that. Your problem is that you think using incorrect logic is a good thing. It is not. Also my example was mocking your explanation of how snow can feel warm. To say some rubbish about wavelengths is not to argue snow makes you warm. It does not follow.
Stephen Robins replying on Jesus by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:36 PM
Do not try to put words into my mouth Dovina, my mouth is too full of teeth and my feet to fit your words.
celticskatermatt1 on Into My World by sliver 12 Nov 2004, 12:36 PM
very emotional
celticskatermatt1 on Dan by dougsoderstrom 12 Nov 2004, 12:33 PM
pretty good if u say so myself but u could cut down on the cussing check out one of my poems-- HANGING or THERES A VIOCE DEEP INSIDE MY HEAD
edpeterson replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:32 PM
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horus8 on Jesus by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:23 PM
A humpbacked turd.
celticskatermatt1 replying on Hanging by celticskatermatt1 12 Nov 2004, 12:22 PM
hey thanks--yea im working on my punct.
Dovina on Hanging by celticskatermatt1 12 Nov 2004, 12:16 PM
Better than your last, but punctuation would help, not hinder the flow, as some think.
thanks for the advice
it doesnt flow man
celticskatermatt1 on The Curse by Dreamer 12 Nov 2004, 11:44 AM
what the heck man
celticskatermatt1 on Standards by skaskowski 12 Nov 2004, 11:43 AM
sketchy man
Dovina replying on Mind's Eye by Sean Allen 12 Nov 2004, 9:28 AM
I step into my skirt one leg at a time, same as you. Or is that your other alias.
Dovina on Only You by hatedestruction 12 Nov 2004, 9:24 AM
You have tried to relate an emotion you have felt to your readers using what you think are logical bridges and similis, but they fail logically. Most readers of poetry appreciate both emotion and logic.
Dovina replying on It Still Hurts by poetryman 12 Nov 2004, 9:15 AM
For a disinterested, but not uninterested, reader like me, it is not needed.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 9:09 AM
There's no reason for a senisble man to become angry enough to swear over a disagreement such as this.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 9:07 AM
And jroday is not doing that. He posits unsubstanciated emotional phrases, but not the same thing too often.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 9:01 AM
That's illogical, but to say it's an example of incorrect logic is to admit logic can be incorrect. You have written an example of gobeldygoop or nonsense.
Dovina replying on Jesus by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 8:54 AM
No, this is about my Jesus.