Stephen Robins
replying on Jesus by Dovina
12 Nov 2004, 12:37 PM
Much as it shames me to say so I find myself agreeing with you. A fully articulated humploaf.
What are you talking about you mad woman. Of course logic can be incorrect. Half of your poems are testament to that. Your problem is that you think using incorrect logic is a good thing. It is not. Also my example was mocking your explanation of how snow can feel warm. To say some rubbish about wavelengths is not to argue snow makes you warm. It does not follow.
Do not try to put words into my mouth Dovina, my mouth is too full of teeth and my feet to fit your words.
very emotional
pretty good if u say so myself
but u could cut down on the cussing
check out one of my poems--
HANGING or THERES A VIOCE DEEP INSIDE MY HEAD
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hey thanks--yea im working on my punct.
Better than your last, but punctuation would help, not hinder the flow, as some think.
thanks for the advice
it doesnt flow man
what the heck man
sketchy man
I step into my skirt one leg at a time, same as you. Or is that your other alias.
You have tried to relate an emotion you have felt to your readers using what you think are logical bridges and similis, but they fail logically. Most readers of poetry appreciate both emotion and logic.
For a disinterested, but not uninterested, reader like me, it is not needed.
There's no reason for a senisble man to become angry enough to swear over a disagreement such as this.
And jroday is not doing that. He posits unsubstanciated emotional phrases, but not the same thing too often.
That's illogical, but to say it's an example of incorrect logic is to admit logic can be incorrect. You have written an example of gobeldygoop or nonsense.