Dovina
replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina
12 Nov 2004, 3:18 PM
lol, but I don't see why.
to end it at 'the crowd goes wild' dunce.
I feel free to, but why?
then feel free to delete.
I knew you were talking about the narator's voice in your poems. I just wanted to break this thing off because it's going nowhere.
And with those indisputably accurate words the matter was finally settled before a capacity crowd at Poemranker Stadium.
P.S. Virtually all my poems are already narrated by complete dunces.
not by writing incoherent sentences it doesn't.
again you fail to make a coherent point. Robert Frost would tell me to learn from jroday. And why, because: 'Frost did not just use the man as a character in his poem, he learned from him.'. What the hell has that to do with telling me to learn from someone who can't write. Go to eratosphere, even to sleepless whispers. Post one of your poems there. See what they say. See if they think that poems that don't track and or have no substance are good poems.
I believe there are ace poets out there who would disagree with you on these points. I think serious poets would tell you to learn from people like jroday. Robert frost, for example, in Mending Wall claims to have learned important truths about property boundaries from his neighbor in Vermont who was like jroday. Frost did not just use the man as a character in his poem, he learned from him.
That should begin with a capital and end in a question mark.
I don't know if you mean to mock, but the magic of poetry is to bring emotions to light, so that similar emotions in a reader become better understood and often more palitable.
'laugh at' then.
can you even read.
...because emotions can not be explained, that is the magic of poetry no doubt.
"deconstruct" is hardly accurate.
Then emotional is not good.
You repeat what I say after saying I'm wrong.
because every time I deconstruct one of your uneducated platitudes you come up with ten more. Do you believe there are ace poets out there who would disagree with me on these points. Do you think a single serious poet would tell me or any student to learn from jroday? And why drag him into it.
Again. Unsubstantial is not good.