CommentsComments 23941–23960 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 3:18 PM
lol, but I don't see why.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 3:17 PM
to end it at 'the crowd goes wild' dunce.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 3:15 PM
I feel free to, but why?
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 3:14 PM
then feel free to delete.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 3:11 PM
I knew you were talking about the narator's voice in your poems. I just wanted to break this thing off because it's going nowhere.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 2:55 PM
And with those indisputably accurate words the matter was finally settled before a capacity crowd at Poemranker Stadium.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 2:50 PM
P.S. Virtually all my poems are already narrated by complete dunces.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 2:40 PM
not by writing incoherent sentences it doesn't.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 2:39 PM
again you fail to make a coherent point. Robert Frost would tell me to learn from jroday. And why, because: 'Frost did not just use the man as a character in his poem, he learned from him.'. What the hell has that to do with telling me to learn from someone who can't write. Go to eratosphere, even to sleepless whispers. Post one of your poems there. See what they say. See if they think that poems that don't track and or have no substance are good poems.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 1:49 PM
I believe there are ace poets out there who would disagree with you on these points. I think serious poets would tell you to learn from people like jroday. Robert frost, for example, in Mending Wall claims to have learned important truths about property boundaries from his neighbor in Vermont who was like jroday. Frost did not just use the man as a character in his poem, he learned from him.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 1:11 PM
That should begin with a capital and end in a question mark.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 1:10 PM
I don't know if you mean to mock, but the magic of poetry is to bring emotions to light, so that similar emotions in a reader become better understood and often more palitable.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 1:04 PM
'laugh at' then.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 1:04 PM
can you even read.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 1:02 PM
...because emotions can not be explained, that is the magic of poetry no doubt.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:57 PM
"deconstruct" is hardly accurate.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:56 PM
Then emotional is not good.
Dovina replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:55 PM
You repeat what I say after saying I'm wrong.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:46 PM
because every time I deconstruct one of your uneducated platitudes you come up with ten more. Do you believe there are ace poets out there who would disagree with me on these points. Do you think a single serious poet would tell me or any student to learn from jroday? And why drag him into it.
richa replying on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 12 Nov 2004, 12:39 PM
Again. Unsubstantial is not good.