CommentsComments 24661–24680 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

Dovina on From Then Till Now by Jeremi B. Handrinos 22 Oct 2004, 8:53 PM
From then til now, God has died and dreaming of sex with no hangups is his replacement. And the cow jumped over the moon.
darylchew replying on Cutting The Ropes by darylchew 22 Oct 2004, 7:30 PM
"the nurse who cares and loves. yet with a swift cut." "The rock smiles, showing it's jagged teeth." it's a love = letting go thing.
fevriere on In the berth by INTRANSIT 22 Oct 2004, 4:51 PM
I love it.
fevriere replying on Zipmark'd by fevriere 22 Oct 2004, 4:37 PM
Allclothed is a compound adjective. I like it. It stays. Slippery slips off the end of the line. I thought you learnt about enjambement the other day? Wasn't it you who was utilisting it so prettily the other day?
cuddlytiger17 replying on Cold Indifference by cuddlytiger17 22 Oct 2004, 1:55 PM
What's the dots? I'm taking its a good thing seeing how you gave me a 9. I'm still curious though.
Dovina replying on A Better God by Dovina 22 Oct 2004, 11:34 AM
And if it were, would you still be an atheist?
Dovina replying on A Better God by Dovina 22 Oct 2004, 11:33 AM
You made the same comment on my last poem, "A Lovely Cog." The one before that, “To Leave a Trace,” talks of the written records we leave after our deaths. And before that, “Archivist of Emotion.” By God, you’re right, I am a librarian. Thank you.
Dovina replying on Lufituaeb by Phaiyne 22 Oct 2004, 11:20 AM
Yes, I thought so,and I agree, but it sounds arrogant.
Dan garcia-Black on A Better God by Dovina 22 Oct 2004, 1:57 AM
It's a riddle. You're a librarian.
MacFrantic on Cold Indifference by cuddlytiger17 21 Oct 2004, 10:02 PM
Quite "...", yes, quite. *9*
MacFrantic on A Better God by Dovina 21 Oct 2004, 10:00 PM
A very satisfying plan, if only it could be... *sigh* What the hell! I'm an atheist! *8*
Phaiyne replying on Lufituaeb by Phaiyne 21 Oct 2004, 7:49 PM
didnt mean for it to be arrogant or conceited, im just trying to point out that inner beauty is stronger than outer beauty.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Youth by thepinkbunnyofdoom 21 Oct 2004, 4:30 PM
A Token is, an item used in place of something else. Tokin, is the smoking of hashish cigarettes(or in our case depending on your coastline pipes/bowls). Its placement was intentional, whether you choose to believe so or not.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom 21 Oct 2004, 4:25 PM
There is nothing sacred here at the ranker, I do tend to avoid such things but someone had to do it, and since I write alot of pimples I figured why not me.
Dovina replying on GODDESS by jroday 21 Oct 2004, 2:51 PM
You said something similar after you deleted my comment on your poem a couple of weeks ago. I guess that's enough commenting.
jroday on GODDESS by jroday 21 Oct 2004, 2:38 PM
I'm sorry Mrs dovina for deleteing your comments. i should have not been on my grandads computer anyway. you know he is in the hospital
Dovina on Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom 21 Oct 2004, 1:39 PM
I thought you were above this sort of thing.
Dovina on Lufituaeb by Phaiyne 21 Oct 2004, 1:30 PM
Arogant
Dovina on Wasted Life by calilegzzz 21 Oct 2004, 1:26 PM
This is quite well written, though too often misspelled.
Dovina on Zipmark'd by fevriere 21 Oct 2004, 1:19 PM
It's better now, but why do you split "slippery?" And "your self allclothed" adds nothing more than "yourself all clothed."