Shardik
on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik
15 Sep 2004, 11:36 AM
Da Lint
Smoking
I like it. Very sad but still good.
very strange
Maryland
From
Plumber
Another
Just
Romeo and Juliet.
Yes, I know
It means that she made Frankenstein before
becoming a wife, a mother, or real herself.
And that it was her will that brought it all about,
that being the whole of the law "do as thou whilst".
-- Alister Crowley
mmmm..donuts
No.
Pretty good old man
"We are all back to normal
We've gotten rid of our fears"
"But we haven't forgotten"
Exactly where do you live that this is the case?
Lyrically, call Ryan Adams. But poetically, I think it's lacking. Maybe I just subconsciously reject the use of the word "baby" in its slang context in a work of poesy. Hm.
Ok, so those are rather amusing.
I love it, and yet I hate the apostrophised written-accent "x-in'".
You missed question marks (lines 4& 8). Correct grammar makes you look educated. I liked "under-wing", and that whole stanza.. But what does this mean;
"But Mary made demons before a wife
Her need was of faith, soon to be law"?
And I have loads more, say when.