zodiac
replying on Mr. Stryker, Do You Really Want Some Kind of War? by cat
9 Aug 2004, 2:53 AM
I didn't post my list on your poem for any specific reason, just because it seemed like as convenient a place for a COMPLEATE LIST OF BUNCOMBE DODGES OF INVETERATE GUFFERS as any other. If I were at all inclined to publish any you-specifick list on your poem, it would probably be called THE COMPLEAT LIST OF COMMON MISTAKEN IDEAS ABOUT POEMRANKER AND ZODIAC MADE BY YOUNG USERS WITH SOMEWHAT INFLATED NOTIONS ABOUT THEMSELVES, and would consist of nothing but mansef recipes and ambiguously-titled links to Christian masturbation-ministry sites. You do the math.
Thanks for the spell check...I usually go over my poems before submitting them, but I guess I missed it. Oh well! As far as preaching to the choir, I would not really call it preaching...and isn't that the point of poetry, being able to relate to what people write? Maybe I am wrong.
Gee, I really like big sporting events like the Olympics. When they are on TV, I can go shopping at Target and I'm in and out in minutes (kinda like sex). It is wonderful level upon which to shop at ignorant venues. I should go shopping now. You should post again. It's been a while. I miss your "POV" on this L.A. lala life.
Oh, you gave yourself a 10 and me a 1. Okay, whatever.
Yeah, us altos generally sing a third below that melody, and a tenor like DgB, well he's all over the scale.
5-7-5 has become 5-3-5, and sobriety drunkenness. You should try it.
You're preaching to the choir. (check pikced)
very chocolate boxy
How is this haiku?
The nice poem ...i like it
thank u for ur comment ...the silence is ur answer..u know sometime people think they know a lot about their worlds where they live in ...but sth always goes wrong ...i know i am not the best ...i wont be best i just try to complete my own verses in any condition ..maybe finaly i will say goodbye to the fancy place ...called world...whatever i lost in the world where this world and other sides lost ...u dont know me ..so u cant reach the sense i created in . .well do u think we care? many things ars still undiscovered ...we are just discovering ...........
"...until I make what they say is the right choice.
"I will extenuate the enemies... "
Your 'level of ignorance' is olympic.
Hauntingly awful.
yea i know it could be. its the first one i've ever really written. I'm from central NY, not too far north of syracuse. why?
could be a bit better considering it's a lyric, where in ny are you from anyway? (8)
sth made me think about this poem ..welldone
the nice poem ..i felt what u were going to say
Wow that last stanza is really cool. I like how you approached the whole mother earth thing with lines like "A mother whose gravity keeps all children near"
Why the semicolon standing guard off to the right?
The second verse is very nice. It's all good.
A brief epoch and a little didactic. Good
"who's" "weathered face"