INTRANSIT
replying on Cranberry shoes by INTRANSIT
27 Jul 2004, 9:44 AM
Thank you sir. How did you get to Laos from here?
Bitter-sweet Laotian candy. Good prose.
no big pompous words. cliches, used artfully almost unnoticeable. backwards works.
Then as I said, we are Doomed, Fucking Doomed.
kill the refrain at least, I think - and "just", ghost line is very nice.
thnx
No I haven't been a member of this website long.
how sad. how very sad... :)
Idiot! she clearly hasn't read any of my poems!
interesting location and motivation - no judgement implied; the poem stands out because of it.
Glad I found this one - a big, fat 10.
Your snatch, how wide is it?
that was good ..i like it
I was once fell into the void, but lucky for me, I was just hallucinating, and it turned out to be my my face in my omellete and a clean nickle of spank.
"To High beak sky"
Sir, you are no beaker.
Hmmmm. My dictionary spells it with two. (American Heritage collegiate dictionary)-Houghton Mifflin '02.
wanna fight about it?
Good idea.
god- you try to be nice and then they even ridicule a beverage you had twenty years ago
When walking on grass, keep your weight on the toes.