x0lovelylarnx0
replying on The Dream by x0lovelylarnx0
25 Jul 2004, 4:06 PM
For one thing the Terza Rima are supposed to only have 10 syllables in each line.
Dear Dovina:
Rather than asking, In what way do I walk in his shoes........... you might ask "How is it that I can walk in that man Dan's shoes"...... And, of, course, the answer is.... VERY CAREFULLY INDEED!"
Love, Doug
What?
Your nothing but a damn yankee.
At least I got the scheme and the syllables right. You're so stupid that you probably didn't think to even check to see how many syllables and what the scheme was in your damn poem.
For your information i'm way passed 3rd and 6th grade.
are you asthmatic too?
i know! i just saw the mistake. i am torn between losing all the lovely kudos and votes, or just chalking it up to old age slight of hand!
perhaps its best you stick to birth charts and the back page horoscopes? dunno... just a subordinate thought, i love to embed my thoughts as constituents of a matrix. it functions for me in words where i abound.
I'm betting 3rd maybe 6th grade... can't be anything higher.. or could it? If so, marm.. we are doomed, fucking doomed, and we are witnessing the Dismal Embrowning of everything we have ever treasured or held dear... if only I could face the four horse men and spare myself this.. if only I could apply for a license to commit genocide on a large scale in the name of keeping the world from falling to the Dimming.
Your sarcasm couldn't be any funnier and brilliant. A parody that deservs a cursed ten. DAMN YOU!!!
Good rant, if a bit long. May Breaonna make it to Pasadena and JJ's where she can get dinner and drink for three bucks.
The Despair haunted the eternity
I canât walk awayâ¦I still rule the chaos as prince of void
and you misspelled pray
If there was any shred of a doubt that you're a minor, it's gone now. Who else but a teenager with a limited vocabulary (or a senior suffering from a degenerative mental disorder, which, I suppose is a slim possibility here) would call me a Loser when there are so many more creative things an immature person could say like, for example, little bleeding twat, ugly pustule, and nut licker- all of which I would validly apply to you if I were not so sure somebody else in your sad life already had.
There. Now retorts should follow something like that.
Amaretto sour? hrmm not much of a drinker, so excuse my cluelessness there. Anyway, your welcome...
In what way then do you walk in his shoes, or should I say four-inch open-toed heels with ankle straps?
It's for reasons like this that you might want to stick with turtle.
this reminds me of long-ago college weekends were I would wake up with a hangover to indulge myself in a breakfast of a cold bagel and an amaretto sour----thanks for the memories.
Dear Dovina:
Yes, I do believe that we are. You see....... In the beginning God created The...... Oh, I'm sorry....I got off onto the wrong "In the beginning"...... please excuse me..... A "senior moment," I suppose.... Uh..... Uh..... You see, in the beginning.... Uh.... that damn man Dan was a male.... However, he had a high degree of "inner (perhaps genetic) "female features," consequently he decided to have an operation..... a sexual transformation type operation..... Thus that damn man Dan became "a dame." So as you can see...... I do believe that (at least essentially speaking) we are,"in fact," talking about "The Same Dame Dan!"
Love, Doug