SupremeDreamer
replying on Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer
22 Jun 2004, 9:36 PM
Neutered?
Being a 14 yr. old teen and reading this... I say: WOW!
You really touched me with your grammar... and your 'jumble' ... and your spell checking... It is unbelievably astonishing to see such words express so deep so pure so... TEEN like...
..And thus, I give it a Zer0... As a token of my gratitude.
rate meeh
im stuck in this little box help
go read the one i care 4 you and it is alot better than my other one srry if some of you are haters on my work but whateva i have ppl who like so idk what the haters think but yall go read my other poem "I CARE 4 YOU" and rate it plz holla imma fixin to bounce so PE@CE OUT
hey yall i think that this one is by best that i have posted and i would like yalls oppinion on thank yall
Axle Rose rocked, before the weave and beads.
Nudered
Shizzle
Now you have something in common with niggers besides that gold-tooth and cocked cap.
You're right, but I just didn't feel that it would benefit the poem to write a whole other stanza just to explain that she was always talking about how beautiful it would be in California. I figured the reader would just kind of pick that up (or just put their own meaning into it). I suppose I was wrong, but what the hell.
Who are these people? Why would using the word "nigger" give them "cred"? I'll give you a 3 because I'm intrigued, but you're going to have to explain more if you want a good vote.
good poem!!
Yer right on!
good to see you back!
kid?
BOLB BLOBBY 8/10
Curse me and my quirks with english. It shall be fixed, thank you for pointing it out, I'm always missing these things when looking over and touching up my work.. ;/
BLOBBY BLOB 9/10
thank yew jessicagurl yew are sweet also and i'm glad you like my modest little ditty,(gosh i nearly said deity then, whatever came over me...and no it wasn't you zodiac...oh you wish big boy) wherever i can spread a little enlightenment and pleasure i shalll be happy to point and spray my sprinkler of big and clever words, no that's not me that's little billy mac zodiac@wibble.com...sorry...but yeh jess babe, thanks
the "big" knave....why thank you god's wife, you DO know me after all
i shall call you the crimson spade...seeing as you are on a permanent period and all that...actually i take it back...the crimson spade is far too dramatic for one so, so dull...sniff
I like this (well, no crazy about the lowercase "i"'s) - for me it stays on the right side of honest introspection.