wilco
replying on Lorca: Canción del Jinete by Sasha
25 May 2004, 8:42 PM
I don't see how translating something makes it yours....So, if I'm in school and I translate a thesis written in Japanese to English.....it's not plagiarism? You're going to have to explain this one a little better.
no mixing done here
Actually, what you just made fun of is Lorca's as well as mine:
En la luna negra
Sangraba el costado
De sierra morena.
It's my translation of Lorca, therfore it's both of ours.
And funny.
At least it's 'original'.
Now that friend is bow'ls... I mean
I've seen some sad shit, but that's the gravy.
How's that working for you so far?
I see so basically you take your shit poetry, and
mix it with great poetry, and hope for the best?
How inventive.
Is that clever?
Can I ask you a SERIOUS question?
Please forgive me for being caddy,
but did you say, "in the blackened moon
a dusky peak was bleeding from a wound?"
That's pretty funny, and you thought that up
all by yourself? Amazing.
What wounded it pray tell?
What bow'ls
Both
I grieve for Bi-anca.
Can you work 'clit' or 'tit' or 'submit' in there someplace? Damn! I'm turning into a white woman-- Michael Jackson.
One moment can create a lifetime of history or two. Good-10-
Is this yours, or Lorcas, or both?
Could have ended stronger.
Needs a new last line.
Why is this on the best list?
You don't even know the difference between
"our" and "are"? If you're going to have shit grammar, do it
with some imagination could you? liken me does
you asshat.
Is true, is true.
[insert lenghthy diatribe about some tangentally related philisophical difference no-one will remember]
I think the first person works pretty well - second person would probably not work at all... I wonder if third person would add anything?
Neato
yes mon. de badness of dis spelling approaches art,
yet stops short of the goal and flagellates itself.
(half of this thought brought to you by Sebastian de Crob)
Spell Check - no
Grammar Check - no
Content Check - no
Why do you even bother, this must have been written in a matter of forty-five seconds.
My shitty comment took longer than that. -2-