Sasha
replying on A Year Later (edited a bit) by Sasha
13 May 2004, 6:38 PM
Colorado?
My condolences
O.K. so spring snow, but it's snowing outside my window right now,
Colorado can be like that.
Still, I understand the point. Screw the time of year, Charity knows no season.
My poem 'All There' was written for my father on his birthday, also the 1 year anniversary of his death. I can feel your pain, well expressed.
Ralph Waldo Emerson,Shelley, Poe, Coleridge,Wordsworth's 'I wandered lonely as a cloud',Pope, Isaac Watts, Dryden, etc etc.
You beat your head alone as you shy from all the best. Is there any rhyme scheme which doesn't cause suicidal tendencies? Perhaps poetry isn't healthy for you?
Winter snow came BEFORE may!!
Were you under orders? Huh were ya?
On this fine May day, I read this as it snows outside my window.These are the people I seek to find, When I pass I won't leave them behind.
AABB rhyme schemes hurt me and cause my forehead to slam the desk in siezure.
Your imagination seems to tell you that 13yr olds are older adults that goes to extreme measures for sympathy... ...And your imagination is wrong... So... what makes you think this time it is right?
And what? Bow'ls is a better reply?
<{Baba^Yaga}>
on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
13 May 2004, 5:22 PM
Actually Sliffer, everything after the top 10 don't 'really' matter.
Crow In a Stagnant Pond by Frivilous Mediocrity
Oh crow in the mire!
Why won't you float nigger
Oh Black bird in quick sand
If you weren't so black
I'd lend a hand.
Oh God! I've made a terrible blunder! I have to go now...
Hmm. No, my imagination still tells me you're a dork.
Limpest possible reply.
wow, sounds like you've had this happen to you before...
does everything have to be written?... or can nothing be left to the imagination?... she dreams of yesterday because the pain grows as each day passes, she dreams of yesterday because it was one less horrible day in a seemingly vapid life
ummm.... no, not at all... but i guess you asked because you want my number?
sliver
on Who are the best poets on poemranker? (A list by me) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
13 May 2004, 4:47 PM
Well, I guess I missed all this, But I see I made your list.I can't type fast so I will just say gracias.
Good lord I hope this doesn't end up as a ghost comment as well.