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Caducus on EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 12 Apr 2004, 11:41 AM
True to the title
edpeterson on The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos 12 Apr 2004, 10:19 AM
funny, but i have not been here long enough to know what the fuck you are talking about. go down on your bad self.
embersandenvelopes replying on The Stems of Roses by embersandenvelopes 12 Apr 2004, 9:14 AM
hehe no, don't worry, I'm not having a rough time. This poem was written with my best friend in mind (that's the we). It's about how when I die, part of me will grow in the roses I envision being planted with my ashes. When a surviving loved one should smell them, memories of my life will be conjured up. Roses are a type of flower that can be difficult to grow. They need a certain environment and a lot of care. But given those two, they will flourish. I can identify my life with that.
some deleted user on short clip about dc, #2 by jsd 12 Apr 2004, 8:28 AM
Succinct! The last line, though, "wearing" seems wrong, maybe something stronger like shouting.
edpeterson on Everyone's choosing sides by zodiac 12 Apr 2004, 8:16 AM
Excellent piece.
Tara57 on Rough draft of a poetry manifesto by zodiac 12 Apr 2004, 8:14 AM
The title I like...not blown away by the poem
edpeterson on Diary by wilco 12 Apr 2004, 6:53 AM
i think it is pretty damn good. simple. ONly just shy of elegant.
tre on lost memories by ggawrysi 11 Apr 2004, 10:51 PM
i hate to go along with the crowd, but u deserved a 10...u surprised me. good job.
tre on self indulgent teenage-style poem needed to spew out. by Roisin 11 Apr 2004, 10:48 PM
ive been thru this exactly. good job.
Tara57 on lost memories by ggawrysi 11 Apr 2004, 10:41 PM
I love you...this poem is beautiful
tre on short clip about dc, #2 by jsd 11 Apr 2004, 10:41 PM
very kool, i like it :)
ggawrysi on short clip about dc, #2 by jsd 11 Apr 2004, 10:40 PM
not often that a very short poem tells a complete story with a distinct point... i don't know, maybe cuz i live in dc it makes it easier to understand it. regardless, well done
ggawrysi replying on lost memories by ggawrysi 11 Apr 2004, 10:38 PM
thank you
jsd on "How Often, Under Starry Skies" by anastomosis 11 Apr 2004, 10:31 PM
As a philosophy major, I really enjoy the topic of this. <grin> Good job.
jsd on lost memories by ggawrysi 11 Apr 2004, 10:29 PM
Beautiful.
ggawrysi replying on One voice by tre 11 Apr 2004, 10:24 PM
one's*
ggawrysi on One voice by tre 11 Apr 2004, 10:24 PM
i like it as a beginning and middle- one more short verse at the end to conclude the poem would have been perfect. it feels like a distinct point was in the making but was left too subtle.
ggawrysi on Rough draft of a poetry manifesto by zodiac 11 Apr 2004, 10:19 PM
i like how most of your lines ended with a verb. at the same time, it was difficult and choppy to move from one line to the next mid-sentence with such brick like words. if the language was not as gruff and more melodic it would have flowed much better. the structure took me away from the content, causing me to lose your point. after re-reading it, i did enjoy the poem's notion of reform and losing older ways of life.
Freethinker1602 on The Stems of Roses by embersandenvelopes 11 Apr 2004, 8:23 PM
one question, why would you be lying under rose stems? I'm not trying to be an ass, I just want to make sure you aren't "having a rough time" and considering something dangerous. Intersting work though even though I have no idea what it's about I give you an 8 I'm on AIM at Impishkat
Tara57 on My Day Off by wilco 11 Apr 2004, 8:20 PM
I love it...sounds like a Streets song...I could read it a hundred times...also mad props on the Zodiac line I'm glad someone had the balls to stand up to him!