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PhSbLoNdE569 replying on depressed by PhSbLoNdE569 14 Mar 2004, 2:12 PM
what the hell is that shit supposed 2 mean?
richa replying on Your silhouette still drinks at my table by Don-Quixote 14 Mar 2004, 2:01 PM
I just clicked on ghazal at the top, and read some examples. Nothing more I am afraid.
INTRANSIT on Blinking by zodiac 14 Mar 2004, 1:59 PM
ready sounds better. I still get fearlessness.
some deleted user on Blinking by zodiac 14 Mar 2004, 1:57 PM
I must agree. The poem is good until the end. I don't object on principle, just don't see how the ending goes with the rest.
INTRANSIT replying on Blinking by zodiac 14 Mar 2004, 1:21 PM
Remembering the fearlessness of youth. I just don't understand the shock value of the cock here. Skinny dipping maybe??? I dunno. pots right, cards a comin'.
zodiac replying on Blinking by zodiac 14 Mar 2004, 1:17 PM
What do you think it is?
INTRANSIT on Blinking by zodiac 14 Mar 2004, 1:16 PM
what is the point here?
Shuushin replying on Your silhouette still drinks at my table by Don-Quixote 14 Mar 2004, 12:26 PM
Where, please, did you get your form rules from?
mindsigns on what i see with strings by New Life Drug 14 Mar 2004, 9:01 AM
It feels more like a run-on sentence than a poem, the images are too random=..some connect and some I just don't know...
mindsigns on My Stigmata: "Psychotica" by SupremeDreamer 14 Mar 2004, 8:55 AM
i think i need to study this more, there's alot there
mindsigns on dear jim d. by peaceseeker 14 Mar 2004, 8:47 AM
Too many quotation marks, me head hurts
zodiac on Repression by alverland theme park 14 Mar 2004, 6:21 AM
"Let the alcohol wash this all" reminds me of my parents who always used to ask me if I was 'doing the drugs' or 'high on the dope', etc. Dear mom and dad: I was.
zodiac replying on The Destination of the Unborn Child by DeadtotheWorld 14 Mar 2004, 6:17 AM
I suggest that the preceding comment by richa is the Unified Theory of Everything so long sought by physicists, except for the toke part, which is utterly false.
richa replying on Zodiac's Visit to Micky D's by Oej-Oej 14 Mar 2004, 6:15 AM
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richa on Your silhouette still drinks at my table by Don-Quixote 14 Mar 2004, 6:13 AM
Don't know much about ghazals, think there is something about repetition you may have missed though. This is good, I have a small problem with 'didn't need to unlock these chains' which sounds a bit corny and 'vengeance passivity' which sounds babble.
richa replying on The Destination of the Unborn Child by DeadtotheWorld 14 Mar 2004, 6:05 AM
I believe we are all born gay, and must partake in manly activities to prove ourself not. Also vis a vis the poeme, I suggest the term toke was invented by a rapper because it rhymed with smoke.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on The Destination of the Unborn Child by DeadtotheWorld 14 Mar 2004, 5:47 AM
Exercises 1. Read -=Dark_Angel=-'s poeme 'Voyage of the Browne'. Compare and contrast. How does each poeme make you feel? [5] 2. "Drugs are cool and if you don't take them your gay". Discuss. [4]
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Gods Musician: Grave Digger by SupremeDreamer 14 Mar 2004, 5:34 AM
Not to dishearten you old bean, but I was actually searching for all poemes with 'God', 'Angel', 'Love' or 'Above' in their titles in order to complete the Love-Above Liste. Cheers! -10-
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on A pinch from the snuff box by Jeremi B. Handrinos 14 Mar 2004, 5:30 AM
You do entertain the most curious fancies.
richa on My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 14 Mar 2004, 4:49 AM
'About how you've worked for your glorified bona' -9-