LuV_jOhNnY
on This is Bad by newagepoet2000
9 Jan 2004, 9:10 PM
You are right, it is bad. At least you warned us.
WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?!?!?!?!?!
sick.
Masticated(hehehe inside joke with friends, quite dirty one at that)
Its kinda funny, in a grotesque immature kind of way
what the heck?
ah, makes more of a "sirious" sense.. hm.. well, that makes the poem even better!
I'm saying that I'm depressed a lot when I'm awake and I rather not feel any of the pain and stay in dream land forever (sorta like dying)
..so basically you are sad/mad about waking up in the morning, so you go back to sleep and become happy again? I feel the same way... everyone does. haha
You know whats scary? It made sense to me.. I like dark things too much ^^;; and i over analze things.
once again... amazed by your words
you do not need spelling skills to read or write poetry...
...they have editors for that purpose...
Your spelling skills, and nose are proof enough that you shouldn't be reading poetry either.
ah yes... something I have a bit to much of in all my poetry... Repeatativness...
tragic love is the only kind of love left in this world, sad but true, but i really liked this poem :)
AH! I love this piece! ..so sad, but the lines
"Friends enjoy the sweet snacks of our get together,
But numbness has seized my taste buds." ...amazing!
whoever gave you a one - THEY should be the ones' in sadness, not you.
it's good, but it gets a little repeatitive
god, i LOVE poems like this, thanx cougarchic
whoever gave a 1 shoulden't be reading poetry
I like how you make death and life seem the same
You're totaly right, it doesn't make too much sense, but I didn't really mean for it to, thats just what was on my mind