hm... I'm not much of a "ranker" ... but I give it a seven... I don't think i understood "Bury me Six feet-deep, with care Woulden't want anyone to find me Life was way too fair" ... um, maybe thats just me. or "I didn't deserve to live on your Earth" ? ... I thought life was fair? all in all, I liked it... just those lines, above, got me confused...

Dream me loving this poem. love ya j

I love it when a man can be this poetic. Pour your heart out baby!!! 10

An awsome read from beginning to end, i woulden't change anything

Hot!!!

So poetic

not gonna say anything, im just gonna give you a 9

Wonderful, good points

Good poem Jay, I give it a 10

you have the 3 d's i like in poetry, deep, dark, and depressing, *applause*

I loved it ^-^

Holy shit! this is awsome, keep writing like this and you'll be famous some day

:*(...crying

easily the best witch poem i have ever read

i also wish i had the strength, it's hard as hel, just know you aren't alone :)

my response has become a shuddering possession...deep man it's good

unique

i just hope you know that all people make mistakes, and just cuz they didn't turn out in the end doesn't mean they didn't have a good family

LSD?! pink, orange, gold, amber. Not bad but I have never seen midnight grey, and the midnight is already blue so there is not need to mention violet skies (a bit of a colour clash too).