poemranker ::Comments the most recent

CommentsComments 35981–36000 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

richa on Fire by Pervy Elf 27 Dec 2003, 3:47 PM
'I have you trapped now' seemed a little odd. Can girls do that? Other than that OK, there is a certain sadness underneath all the clumsiness.
richa on Live for Die for by firestorm998 27 Dec 2003, 3:39 PM
You could at least have made an effort.
Joe-joe replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 27 Dec 2003, 6:17 AM
Again this obsession with Jesus..it's absolutely amazing! Scoundrel? You're a panick...just can't resist being a wise-guy can you? That's ok, I kind of like that about you...and Dreamer as well....got to have an edge about you or you won't be any fun to hang with. Glad to hear the boy is doing well and that you're paying proper attention to your crafts. Later Joe
ok u have my attention on this one - hows abt a freakin 10
more like you'd be crazy, cold and wishing you be dead.
ShaNoN+960317485 on Love Is In The Air by Blindpoetry 27 Dec 2003, 5:23 AM
sounds more like a craving to me - wud never call it love
ShaNoN+960317485 on Dream Me by jasondingus 27 Dec 2003, 5:21 AM
Lets Dream me giving you a ten not a nine
SupremeDreamer replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 27 Dec 2003, 12:56 AM
Well, so my stuff is on the lighter side? Damn it, I thought I succeeded in being extreme ages ago. Or was hoping this priest killing piece would do it. Your giving off mixed messages here, and I feel as if I've failed in one of my core goals. I demand an explaination. Oh, and if your being so humble now, that would explain the failure to inject the sizzling attitude and so forth in your last write?
SupremeDreamer replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 27 Dec 2003, 12:49 AM
I just love how you cut through the bull and get right to the good stuff.
horus8 replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 26 Dec 2003, 10:08 PM
What was that your New Years revolution to be nice to me? Thanks, those were some charming things to say, and yes my son's doing very well. he goes to this great school, and he's really a lovely young man.the perfect combination of me and his mother. Sensitie yet kind and giving yet not easy to take advantage of. Outside of my dark world of poetry I'm actually quite sober and reseved these days. I smoke a pipe and read mostly. little acting here, a lot of writing there. things are coming along, slowly but properly. Thanks for asking, and we all know your going to do well this year, now don't we. you're in with the baby jesus. Scoundrel.
Joe-joe replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 26 Dec 2003, 7:16 PM
No no....I respect the boyscouts and would not dare equate them with the likes of you. I hope you're getting your shit together and are guiding your son in the right direction. It is an enormous responsibility you have....he is observing your every move and listening closely to every word that you utter. You only get one chance to get it right so make sure your attention is where it belongs and that your base of values is in tact. How's the music, acting and writing business going? I hope you're finding your way and growing up in the process. You certainly are a hard worker who has a passion for what he does. Your art is not my cup of tea but that's not to say it is without appeal. I wish you good luck.
horus8 replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 26 Dec 2003, 5:00 PM
Thank you Joe, I'm flattered, but I also know you say that to all of the boyscouts this time of year.
Joe-joe replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 26 Dec 2003, 4:26 PM
Such a pathetic little boy you are Horus.....a pathetic little boy.
horus8 on Fire by Pervy Elf 26 Dec 2003, 2:17 PM
I once knew this girl that wanted me to stick my foot in her vagina,and I did, but I could never look at her without laughing again, so that kind of sucked.
horus8 replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 26 Dec 2003, 2:12 PM
You mean, it's been some time since he's dropped your drawers, and spanked you?
Joe-joe replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 26 Dec 2003, 1:34 PM
Eh pay me no mind....I was probably in one of my pissed off moods. If been working very hard on freeing myself from the bondage of ego and pride...I've always been a hard nosed stubborn son of a bitch....and always thought they were positive qualities....I'm getting a bit older and realize that it's all about finding peace with yourself and the world around you....it's an uphill battle sometimes but that's what life is all about..that journey we all find ourselves on...no matter what we say we believe in.....
SupremeDreamer replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 26 Dec 2003, 12:53 PM
Yes, I agree. But you should see the die hard atheists talk about religion, its like a mosh pit. The folks that don't believe generally have more interesting things to say about Jesus in my opinion. (not the DH atheists mind you, they say the same shit) But I've always had a keen interest in the interpretation of the bible and its close relation to all other relgions.. All is well with me, and yes, its been some time since we've spoken- actually, the last time was when I wrote that retard remix parody... you took it pretty badly.
Although there are some akward/forced moments in the second half of this piece(e.g. "the blade replaced god")your vivid imagination remains well in tact here. The 1st 3 verses are extremely well worded....I thought you were on your way to a 10 as I was reading but the poem kind of fizzled out a bit in the last 3 verses. Again, I continue to be facinated by the obsession so many on this site have with Jesus and Catholicism. It seems that those who do not "believe" have more to say about Jesus than those who do. Very interesting phenomenon...don't you agree. I hope all is well with you Dreamer..it's been some time since we've spoken. Peace......Joe
Blindpoetry on Fire by Pervy Elf 25 Dec 2003, 9:59 PM
Romantic, no? hm.. though, I can't help but think this was inspired by sex...?
horus8 replying on Lenola prays with a stiletto by SupremeDreamer 25 Dec 2003, 11:56 AM
Not at all. It just made me chuckle.