Shut the fuck up you preteen tit. I bet you can't even get do the ninja moves on mortal kombat, let alone in your ( and I use this in the broadest possible term) 'life'.

Are you some sort of nut? Hearing voices means you need help, dumbass.

This is a purile piece of shit. So is my work, I know, but mine is intentional.

Ok, which one of you 2 buggers has submitted this purile piece of crap in *MY* account? Oh, wait stupid question.

Your end tosses a great poem, and there's a "your" that should be a "you are" in the beginning. You had me going there, for a minute there. A nice try 7.

only one other has said so-...began unintentionally, I thought IT deterred, but...ffffffffffff. YES- sex, you are a smart feller. I enjoy the bulk of your werk.

kudos... seemed to have some sort of meter, almost. good composition and nice work on the structure ... I liked the lip biting kiss comment

heh - funny - but "mouthful of pee"? blech. deft weaving of rythm and rhyme; have a nine. -9-

I like it lots - but I struggle for meaning - a sexual encounter? This thing you do with the line spaces and break... works. A pleasant, inviting cadence. -9-

""He gripped her thigh, and death smiled." "The bus will give you a hard-on with books in your lap" "I'm sick of these stinky boots, I'll never wake up in a good mood again". Jim Morisson.

good insanity in a big bang:o)

Well, reminds me of my mother.. drunk and attempting to knife my father. Blessed with eight.

We dont need an Antichrist to bring any apocalyptic end – we have our own Leaders to do the Job better then him

If mother is the the Earth - Who is the Father?? Dont tell me they are the same:o)

I like that movie. I like Ghazals. I licks that shit, and then swats it off the table and shit.

At least the wristless might still sing.

Cocca.