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replying on null by Bill Z Bub
19 Nov 2003, 1:48 PM
lol.
I would take them to court and sue them both for a divorce. You know, that's a real option by the way. I have friends that have done it at your age. If you can prove that they are both incompitent, and have your worst interests in mind, and only their selfish shit lives in mind. you'll win. Because you've got a job with dave to support yourself here, plus me and Nadine, and Bills Giving you a free ride to Crossroads private bording school. The judge would let you live with me, and you could finish your education without having to be subject to your parents misery, addictive violent behaviour patterns, and extreme immaturity. Because, trust me when I say "their misery" young one, as far as I'm concerned? Has just begun. Everyone on this planet deserve an opportunity to have a normal stable education, and home life. to not be able to provide a child with even that? Is Criminal, and hell hath no equal to a child scorned.
is poemranker confused? or has some fusible link fried?
admittedly, the assonance is a bit forced. Poll is also the top of the head.
what did you delete?
Nifty. But I don't get "he probed my poll". I'm sure its just me.
beauty, eh
Very moving - excellent metaphors. A truly touching poem - 10
I liked this - the possibility that your child was destined to be yours. Sometimes it's hard to remember that in the midst of math homework that they just don't understand (and, in their opinion, never will). Hold onto that beauty - as they grow, somedays it's all you've got...
All green.
read, baby. Read. it's the answer to both.
half great, all fun
sums it up, all right.
I liked "I see promise" (in my son's eyes).
But, don't we choose who we love, that is, except our children?
Also liked "I passed you at birth" (!!)
Damian Hurst? Archaeology? Can you help me refine my search sir?
I like the write. Don't like the topic. You seem to do haikus well.