Sucks huh? I especially like the third stanza.

?! By the way, how do you submit 4 when the rest of us mortals are restricted to 3?

Ever tried Jolt? That aughta get er

Touching. BTW, I love cars too

O.K. sounds right to me

Somewhere on that beach there are spoilt peaches. Good job, A nice addition to all our lost father poems. I shall return the ten you gave me.

I like it, the darkness of it seems to touch my soul somehow.10

Is there anyone besides me who can do that? I doubt it.

Fuckin' perfect.

I think the moon was jewish last night. What is the difference between being a racist and having a "severe distaste" for a peoples? Thank you. My eyes are bleeding now. No vote. Well written, however I got nothing from this one. shoot me.

For the record, I don't agree with deleting comments. And I don't agree with your wings either. This cut SOUNDS perfect to me and I followed it easily. I think the problem with the springs was you were trying/thinking about compression springs versus extension springs. The only extension springs I can think of are on screen doors and engine throttles. Both bad Ideas for a poem.

Chance is the prance of Lance the Gay! Prance then chance queer ants and posh pants Lance likes Trance music and getting fisted!

If silence bacffires? We can only hope it does right in your face blinding you just long enough to send you drifting across the median and into on coming traffic.

Great way to avoid any conflict story wise! Though it tried to make you several times. You still avoided giving it life.

You must be a liquid lama?

Man baby Man baby that's your poem.

A Poopmare, in vivid zero dimension.

Why do the ladies always fall the hardest for the homos? inaccessibility drives them pure red lipstick and fishnets.

Whoops, a poem about puppy love and long distance turmoil? That's unheard of.