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nope...not afraid of catching the aids, just the egocentric-homoism......hybristophilia, much more attractive!
kingit on wretched heart-wrench by calliope 4 Nov 2003, 10:15 AM
this is sweet.
kingit on Aspic by Shardik 4 Nov 2003, 10:11 AM
Yes, teasing the meat satisfies.
Maybe all this garbage is our own fault
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on vampirism extrapolated by FreeFormFixation 4 Nov 2003, 9:10 AM
I believe this poem is about Jesus feeding the malnourished.
Are you people afraid of AIDS?
tadpole replying on advice by ThePariahDog 4 Nov 2003, 9:05 AM
ditto to Shuushin's comment
I just did in an excercise in my programming class where I had the students write a program that by simulating a vampire needing to feed everynight, and thereby converting another human into vampire - how long would it take to convert all the humans into vampires. Turns out it takes just about a month to convert 6 billion people. one of the "proofs" that vampires don't exist - but it makes a few arbitrary (and silly) assumptions. as for the poem here - I feel like I need to munch on it more, but I do so hesitantly because there isn't much room for interpretation (not quite getting it). I do like some of the bits in it: "neck knives red drops stained scarf" is cool.
Shuushin on advice by ThePariahDog 4 Nov 2003, 8:15 AM
it does have a bigger than life feel - and I'm gonna disagree with the dear with headlights; it is quite poetic (what isn't? Sounds like attitude to me). I don't really get the bit about taking an adequate wife though - unconvincing our vague, somehow.
some deleted user on advice by ThePariahDog 4 Nov 2003, 7:42 AM
Almost biblical but hardly poetic
Some good ones, and some dooky.
some deleted user on Sun Dogs by EAger to Offend 4 Nov 2003, 6:49 AM
yes
some deleted user on A Fistful of Haiku for All Ages by HaikuMofo 4 Nov 2003, 6:48 AM
Like a loft full of jumble, 'the a-team, fool' was my antique.
horus8 replying on Aspic by Shardik 4 Nov 2003, 6:44 AM
Legally?
some deleted user on (pieces, peaces) by Patsy 4 Nov 2003, 6:43 AM
Nice individual lines
some deleted user on it's a new crayon by FreeFormFixation 4 Nov 2003, 6:41 AM
earpattite don't work but anti-lame is cool
some deleted user on embryonic inquiries by calliope 4 Nov 2003, 6:39 AM
I think you need a smack to start you breathing
some deleted user on my stuff is like stuff by skaskowski 4 Nov 2003, 6:38 AM
Great image 'my lips are like razors your neck slit' Sul(ph?)fur soothes?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Aspic by Shardik 4 Nov 2003, 5:28 AM
Have you ever experienced a 'jowling'?
Queerly, true.