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A bombastic ah, bomb? 12!!!
A masterpiss.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Think by necroscope7 2 Nov 2003, 10:43 AM
Yep!
Jesus put me down.
==Doylum on Extra Ordinary by eviltwin 2 Nov 2003, 8:34 AM
How on earth can fiction lie? How can you have your pudding if you don't eat yer meat If you don't eat your meat how can you have any pudding. To lie is to intentionally decive, fiction does not try to decive we've got documentaries, government reports and newspapers for that. That aside everything else seems in order especally line 13 & 14. 10/10.
==Doylum on Think by necroscope7 2 Nov 2003, 8:09 AM
Ha ha ha aha h ahja ah fuckin excellent!
==Doylum on Today by necroscope7 2 Nov 2003, 8:00 AM
So in today I?ll live is probably the most exceptional line but the're all quite brilliant!
basit_i on Borders II by Patsy 2 Nov 2003, 7:49 AM
Well, to leave this out would be too...conspicuous :), and so, I am here. I shall say simply that the internal stirrings this implies are not unknown to my precincts. And now, I shall leave the confessional, and go about my work. they really should have the option of point-fives when voting--I'm always caught between rounding up or rounding down.
My commentating will come, yet! If I am free on Thursday, perhaps. But, until then, I must take pride in this poem, note the correlations to Francis' "Summons", and continue on...
basit_i on Recycle by Patsy 2 Nov 2003, 7:40 AM
yowee. I apologize for the previous comment--now, a month and a half later, I come back to this, and it strikes me as very, very "good". It's just a month and a half too old for me, that's all. :)
Shuushin on The Dread by scitz 2 Nov 2003, 7:33 AM
Well done.
richa replying on Shattered by Katzclear 2 Nov 2003, 5:38 AM
I love the way you disguise pretentiousness with adolescent-style ruudness.
Shuushin on freewrite~1-10-10/11am by shadowaura 2 Nov 2003, 5:34 AM
a nice flow of conciousness with some interesting allusions (you don't see "Septuagint" everyday). Not sure if you intended to use the apt "liquid lies" twice though. "over" works just fine, btw.
richa on freewrite~1-10-10/11am by shadowaura 2 Nov 2003, 5:30 AM
cool wordplay
==Doylum replying on Hugh Heffner's Halloween party by Jeremi B. Handrinos 2 Nov 2003, 4:22 AM
Glorious use of the words wonderful "great" and sentence to form an honorable, penetrating, masterful, excellent, exceptional, glorious, illustrious, magnificent, outstanding, splendid, superb comment! Ingenious abuttage of with and that!
some deleted user on Hugh Heffner's Halloween party by Jeremi B. Handrinos 1 Nov 2003, 9:52 PM
Jesus put me here.
Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on Shattered by Katzclear 1 Nov 2003, 9:40 PM
I would hijack an iron and straighten out my face. Then I would go door to door selling magic beans.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on The Dread by scitz 1 Nov 2003, 9:05 PM
A perfect moment for bedazzling drug use. Used, naturally, as a smoke screen. lol.
Wonderful use of the word "great" to start a sentence with that includes a Polish Pope.
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