Jeremi B. Handrinos
on Just Another Day by dougsoderstrom
2 Nov 2003, 10:50 AM
A bombastic ah, bomb? 12!!!
A masterpiss.
Yep!
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on Hugh Heffner's Halloween party by Jeremi B. Handrinos
2 Nov 2003, 10:42 AM
Jesus put me down.
How on earth can fiction lie? How can you have your pudding if you don't eat yer meat If you don't eat your meat how can you have any pudding. To lie is to intentionally decive, fiction does not try to decive we've got documentaries, government reports and newspapers for that. That aside everything else seems in order especally line 13 & 14.
10/10.
Ha ha ha aha h ahja ah fuckin excellent!
So in today I?ll live is probably the most exceptional line but the're all quite brilliant!
Well, to leave this out would be too...conspicuous :), and so, I am here. I shall say simply that the internal stirrings this implies are not unknown to my precincts. And now, I shall leave the confessional, and go about my work. they really should have the option of point-fives when voting--I'm always caught between rounding up or rounding down.
My commentating will come, yet! If I am free on Thursday, perhaps. But, until then, I must take pride in this poem, note the correlations to Francis' "Summons", and continue on...
a nice flow of conciousness with some interesting allusions (you don't see "Septuagint" everyday). Not sure if you intended to use the apt "liquid lies" twice though.
"over" works just fine, btw.
cool wordplay
Glorious use of the words wonderful "great" and sentence to form an honorable, penetrating, masterful, excellent, exceptional, glorious, illustrious, magnificent, outstanding, splendid, superb comment! Ingenious abuttage of with and that!
Jesus put me here.
I would hijack an iron and straighten out my face. Then I would go door to door selling magic beans.
A perfect moment for bedazzling drug use. Used, naturally, as a smoke screen. lol.
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on Hugh Heffner's Halloween party by Jeremi B. Handrinos
1 Nov 2003, 8:56 PM
Wonderful use of the word "great" to start a sentence with that includes a Polish Pope.
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