Jeremi B. Handrinos
on freewrite~1-10-10/11am by shadowaura
1 Nov 2003, 6:45 PM
"-over" should be 'ever'.
Oh wait... Freuindin... he he...
lol
Ah, such a usefull comment! My hero! That's a good suggestion. I do intend to clean this one up, think it could be better put together as well.
thanks, I'm sure I will use your suggestions for my next draft.
why tone down presumed "sexual metaphors"? if anything, I'll liven them up a bit. -not that it was written to be sexual, btw.
Great use of Polish in refrence to the Pope!
Can't you write a poeme about something that isn't the amazing, magical thing you think of your life as?
Hey! you are absolutley correct :) ~*~
uuhhhhh....... nothing?
what did i tell you about talking in German to me?
Danke shune mein guht kamarade!!!! (Thank you my good friend ^.^)
Fabulous!.... 10/10
On a hot summers night would you offer your throat to
the wolf with the red roses!!!!!
I explod my firework all the time !!
And ilight my own fuse?