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on paint brush by ~ska~
16 Oct 2003, 7:23 AM
like the paint brush theme too, not sure about the decorating cliche stripping off.
Oh yes and rhyming for the sake of it will not impress anyone, and is most likely to take your poem in a direction you do not mean and waste your time.
strippers are old nudes, and that does not bare thinking about
Everybody thinks Horus8 should patent the contraption "vulva holster".
Che Che Nie
Damn fine with me. 9.
I had a coat like that once, but then I shot it. Twice for reassurance.
Why bother? You're defeating yourself.
At a movie? They all have cell phones Lord Chutney. You obviously don't live in a large urban American area.
Funny as hell; very clever!
my favorite: "*Nude thirds of all nudely-weds cannot afford to buy a nude home, a nude
survey reveals. âWeâre thinking of emigrating to Nudefoundland,â say Mr
amd Mrs John Nude."
(it's still nude a God Damned sonnet...)
i like how it feels in my mouth.
I still don't understand how you found out that Joe-Joe's real name is James Wright.
some deleted user
on Addicted to the agony of waiting for something you love by Mister Cakes
15 Oct 2003, 1:28 PM
I am caught in a whisper, when I try to shout: this is exactly how I've once felt. Eyery word is like a sentence, every sentence like a book. waiting in vain for someone you love...how beautiful sad!
www.engrish.com
Read my poem "Pauling in Disguise". You might enjoy it (being a person in search of poetry). Are you aware that this story is a true medieval Chinese legend?
Enlighten me, effete marie.
What is this 'poetry' you seek and do not find? Is it passion? Is it shock to affect? Is it message to purpose? Is it a tongue carefully coiled around a tasty phrase?
Which of these things do I not possess in abundance and been ignored by you for having it - only to find you banging on my lone whimsy wall?
Why do I keep believing I might actually find some poetry here?
does a failing libido equal celibacy? Stick to musing.
most excerrent.