Shuushin
on For M. B. by Tits
15 Oct 2003, 11:27 AM
I would like to tell you how impressed I am at this poem.
one who?
not to be televised, live.
how wonderfully ironic!
?-Dave_Mysterious-?
on An Ode to the cat fish head helmet on your penis by horus8
15 Oct 2003, 10:22 AM
Look, no one's forcing you to sit next to people with mobile telephones.
nice
"Masks of Superiority" - This title rings so true within my heart. How did you think of it??!
Don't be so coy now.
Is the hot waterfall a shower? I once saw an episode of Batman where the Joker turned the city's water supply into jelly, and Commissioner Gordon unwittingly had a shower and got jelly on him.
How did you get to be a poemwanker? It must have happened withing the last week and a half going by the email address in the red box. Tell me now. I can't be bothered to email you. Was it for inappropriate elevation of Christian baked goods?
CAD,
nice start.
this is a lovely tribute, but in terms off its poetics, it could use a revamp. the last stanza is definitely the weakest.
good to see you writing again.
Yes, silly me, I missed out the word "Road".
I am such a dunce!
There is no Royal Grammar School, Amersham, High Wycombe, Bucks. For a start, Amersham is not contained within High Wycombe, although Amersham Road does run through it.
Well, OK, but if it were a sonnet, then it would be a completely different poem, so how could you possibaly say that you would give it an 8?
Who are these swarthy sounding fellows?
Excellent. -10-
Excellent. -10-
Excellent. -10-