Caducus
on Ecohippie by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
9 Oct 2003, 8:32 AM
i so cracked up at the last 2 lines of S4.
very modest but my mark sir is not - 8
A bowl of solid gravy.
Very good.
There once was a Goldsmith called Zac,
Who carried his wealth in a sack,
He sympathised a lot
With those who had not
He ended up painting himself black.
Rarrrr.
more like the mucus, less like the d.,dsdj???js.
Me too.
As in I mightcan do that?????,d.,dsdj???jsjsaj112987218u9
Or as in I might can my salty sea dog skippjack packmac mucus for later years?
I look forward to hearing some more poems about how much you enjoy drugs. I feel it is a much unexplored topic on this site.
Gosh I hate that asswell!!!!111
The sun shines out my arks of golden wonder too
DYEWANNA BE IN MY GANG MY GANG MY GANG
DYEWANNA BE IN MY GANG OH YEA
DYEWANNA BE IN MY GANG MY GANG MY GANG
DYEWANNA BE IN MY GANG OH YEA
DYEWANNA BE IN MY GANG MY GANG MY GANG
DYEWANNA BE IN MY GANG OH YEA
Oh alright then
don't like the rhyming, it seem arbitrary.
Other than that I like it. Reads like a kind of thesis in verse.
Glad you mentioned emerson
So many ace lines, my favourite is' To swim is so much harder than to float or clasp the nearest rock and say that this is now my truth' a nice little half rhyme too.
Not too didactic either which is quite a feat for a poem about truth
Were you at Windsor or Eton?
You have neglected to mention the following important philosophical figures:
a)Joseph Smith
b)Aristotle
c)Shang Tsung
'I curse my parents for sending me,
To a respectable school.'
Too true
Yes!Egyptian Mythology! Although it's probably about something else! Yes!
?-Dave_Mysterious-?
on Joe-Joe's Retard Trinity Remix (There can be only one) by Y2kSlamPoet
9 Oct 2003, 7:31 AM
SHIT MAN!!!
This is the shit. I've just done an ounce of Horlicks and three hob-nobs, and this just like blew my mind. I was like fucking spewing and stuff and chortling so much that my head literally exploded.
you have some desperate misspelling here, my friend. the one that stands out most glaringly is "the Pilot". at first, i thought you were writing a parody. but then i realized that you were referring to Pontius Pilate.
there are some good ideas in here, but your long-winded discourse loses steam before it gets barely started.
No, "the pen is mightier than the egg"
?-Dave_Mysterious-?
replying on -=Words_From_Dark_Angel=- by wEdible Underpantsw
9 Oct 2003, 7:05 AM
No, faeces you dunce.
i don't get why this is so funny.
this best part:
"to melt that cursed instrument
and bury it in wet cement."
is sadly buried in the rest of it - but your audience of one will likely appreciate the piece more.
which is cool.